I love this, how you personified the potion made me giggle. That was because I was quite convinced this was a person for sometime, one thing though. You shouldn't actually mention the transition of Felix from "Human" to potion. I believe you need to just have a clear break off point from human to potion. I love how the whole thing is pieced together. The ending was pretty ironic, favourite part.Author's Response: Thanks! I'll see if I can revise it, you are probably right about the transition. Report Review
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