It was amazing! I never though I could ever like a Lucius/Bella ship, but I liked this one! True, it wasn't so much Lucius/Bella as just Lucius and Bella in a story, but still loved it!Author's Response: Yes I know what you mean, less a love story and more of a break up story!
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Wow! Very deep and riveting! Perfect characterization and a wondrous one-fic. Keep up the good work! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you ever so much!
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First of all, the banner was amazing! Have you made it yourself? And as for the story, your descriptions were really good, but there were a few mistakes such as falsity (which should have been falsehood) and shined (which should be shone). I felt sorry for the poor rabbit ad I liked Lucius' explanation before he left. I would give you 9 out of 10 for this one I suppose.Author's Response: Oh thank you, yes I make all the banners myself :D
Ah yes, I'm sure I have mentioned before that my spelling and grammer can be pretty bad if I am jest pelting out a story. I think this one took me about an hour to write haha! Report Review
i absolutely love it! Bellatrix is my favorite character!Author's Response: Thank you soo much! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed! Report Review
Very good. I liked it a lot. It's unique and I feel like it conforms very well to the characters you chose. All in all, nicely done.Author's Response: Thank you so much for such an encouraging review! I'm sure Bellatrix/Lucius pairings are quite unpopular but I quite like the idea that they could have been in love once?
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