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Review #1, by Megann It Was I

14th December 2009:
i really do admire this. It is brillant, and goes perfect with harry potter. Looove it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. ^_^ Your support means a lot.

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Review #2, by long_live_luna_bellatrix It Was I

28th August 2009:
Wow, that was chilling. And your writing was incredible. You wrote Henrietta's proper family very nicely. I felt you captured the way people spoke a century or more ago amazingly. It was a great story.

I thought that student who wanted to know of Henrietta's life had no reason to want that information so desperately, so maybe you could've explained why she just HAD to know. Also, it was a little unrealistic that the Bloody Baron, so moody, to submit to a student.

Otherwise, great. The story flowed well, I saw everything clearly. The writing overall was incredible. Nice work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :) I was going to have Nick explain it to her (which I think she asked out of curiosity, really) but I kinda wanted to play with the Baron. I'm sure he's intimidating, but it doesn't particularly say somewhere that he wouldn't submit to a student. :D

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Review #3, by _Maya_ It Was I

18th August 2009:
That was very well-written. I hadn't really ever wondered about the Hogwarts ghosts but I guess there's a story behind each of them.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Each one of us has a story, even ghosts! ^^ Thanks for the review.

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Review #4, by Pretty Purple Pelican It Was I

5th August 2009:
Very nice story! I think you could have done a little more with their courtship in order for the impact of his betrayal to really hit the readers, but your writing style is very elegant. I enjoyed reading it! :)

Author's Response: I agree so much. My word was being funky and recorded my number of words weird, so I thought I had over eleven thousand words when I really had just over two-thousand. It was already too late when I submitted it and queue was being funny..ah, well. :D Thanks for your review :)

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