Reading Reviews for Through the Darkness
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Review #1, by Marilyn_Snape Dawn has broken

15th September 2009:
And the continuing dilemma- I'm not dead, so now what do I do? Really like this story so far :)

Author's Response: Yay, that's Snape's task finished and what now?

Due to exams I haven't written the next chapie yet, so it will take some time to find the answer to that question.

I am very glad you like it :)
Thank you for leaving a review!!!

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Review #2, by Paloma Patil Dawn has broken

31st August 2009:
Oh - I like what you've done with the time-frame here, moving backwards and forwards. (Nice job on your Breaking Dawn poem, as well.)


Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a review.You just made my day!

When nobody said anything about the flashbacks and the poems I was starting to worry that nobody liked it.

The pieces from different times are supposed to form an entity. In this chapter the war has just ended (in both present and past time) and Severus has to redefine himself/ his goals... I think things will become clearer as we move along ;-)

I'm really, really happy you liked since I absolutely loved your Remus/Tonks story.
Best wishes :-)

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Review #3, by Paloma Patil A new day

31st August 2009:
That's an interesting start to your story. Off to read more.


Author's Response: Thank you ever so much for leaving a review!!! I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #4, by essenni Dawn has broken

26th August 2009:
It is rather confusing how Severus managed to get into the forest and lose his memory of the previous events. I hope you will explain it clearly and there will be a point in him losing his memory.
I liked Luna!

Author's Response: Don't worry about Severus' memory loss, it has its reason and its function. These things are already mapped out in my mind, but I'm taking some time to get there. It is directly connected to how he managed to survive Nagini's bite. It will be essential for him to find out how he did that in order to regain what he has lost.
As for Luna, I just had to bring her up, she's such a witty, funny and unconventional character and I really love her.
Thank you very much for leaving a review, I always crave to know what my readers think!

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Review #5, by Marilyn_Snape A new day

24th August 2009:
oh! Very cool, cannot wait to read more :^)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving a review! The next chapter is already on its way. Have fun reading :-)

PS: I'm looking forward to the next chapter of "Queens of the Snow" ;-)

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Review #6, by natholius A new day

20th August 2009:
This looks like it could be an amazing story; the first chapter is very well done. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the first chapter and I hope you will enjoy the following ones. The second chapter is basically written but I feel like there are still some changes I have to make, so it might take another couple of days for me to submit it to the queue.
Thank you so much for your review!

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