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Review #1, by Mrs K Potter Like a Queen

23rd February 2012:
Aww!!! This is a very cute story. I like how you incorporated the flash backs with the train ride.

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Review #2, by avidfan68 Like a Queen

1st November 2009:
Nice story. I enjoyed all the missing moments at the Burrow, from Ginny's point of view. I normally stick with cannon stories, but I like reading alternate ways G/H got together. It could make a nice short story or novella, if you feel like continuing. (Hint, hint!)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and I'm sorry it took so long to respond. Have no fear, the story arc isn't over yet. My other story "A Princely Sum" is from the same timeline, and I have a pretty good idea how the year is going to go.

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Review #3, by whitney26 Like a Queen

20th September 2009:
Beautiful, stunning writing, I want more plse

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Review #4, by sophielefay Like a Queen

7th August 2009:
great story! i really liked how the flashbacks were integrated into the story, and even though it's a little different than i woud imagine harry acting, the harry/ginny interaction was great too. and the ending was great

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments, I'm glad you liked it. Harry is a little out-of-character for most Post-OotP stories, but this is because I haven't written the back-story for this, which shows the reasons for his changes.
Thanks!


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Review #5, by Malfoyfriend20 Like a Queen

6th August 2009:
awww, that was sweet! REALLY long! but very cute! loved it! *claps and a million brownies*

Author's Response: Yeah, 8000+ words is long for a one-shot, but I really couldn't see breaking it into chapters--the only possibility would be a LOT of little chapters, and it still wouldn't have flowed well.
Thanks for commenting, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!


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Review #6, by Sarah MacKay Like a Queen

6th August 2009:
DukeBrymin,
This was a nice and fluffy one-shot. I enjoyed the way it played out though Ginny's point of view. There was a bit of detail that I was thankful that you added, when you were mentioning how Harry had changed upon returning to the Burrow, you wrote that Previously Harry had been standoffish when it came to showing and accepting signs of affection. It is hard to get used to that for someone that's been deprived of it and I thought of most of all you wrote that was more real than anything. It's a small detail that some writers tend to forget about Harry so thank you very much for adding it.
Overall this story was good, the AU part where Ginny and Harry got together at the beginning of the year just reminds me what Harry said in HBP that "we could have months, years even" if he'd noticed her sooner. Your story really brings out that aspect of what could that year have been like if it happened your way. Good job!
--Mac

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments, I enjoyed reading them. I'm trying hard to make Harry's progression from angst!OrderOfThePhoenix!Harry to the Harry he'll be at the end of my sixth-year story, of which Like a Queen is a part, so it's nice to know that you think I'm doing all right.

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Review #7, by Harry and Ginny Like a Queen

6th August 2009:
great story u have here. i think u should do a sequel to this!!! what do u think?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. The good news is that this is one story from my designed sixth-year fic. There's another story in the arc, so far, that picks up around Christmas time, and eventually I'll write the whole year.

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