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Review #1, by HereLiesDobby Black Memories

17th August 2009:
hhmmm.not really sure about this. you and your wacko mcgriddle-loving best friend must have been on something. couldn't have been the whining and bowel movements of said-best friends kitty could it? oh wait...that was a different mickey d's viist ;)

anyway, it's lovely and wonderful. you've done an excellent job of journeying into draco's change of heart after the 6th book. also, who doesn't want a bit more of our favorite slytherin when we're bored of hearing about the trio's prolonged camping trip? i certainly do :) anyway, a few grammatical errors here and there that i know would bother you...but easy to fix. We've already discussed my other suggestions for this chapter and i'm very pleased with your genius in this story :) i can't wait for the next chapters!

Author's Response: I have four words for you, my RLBFF: Oh, do be quiet!

(But I love you, and you know that)

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Review #2, by evanlyn Black Memories

17th August 2009:
I really like this chapter. Its brilliant!! I like this especially as it seems like he's turning away from the death eaters, but is kind of stuck. Like, he knows its wrong, but its what it is and he has to just live with it?? Should be a really interesting story, hope you have loads of fun writing it!!

p.s What the hell are McGriddles?? I mean, we have McNuggets and stuff, but McGriddles?? Thats the onyl part of this story I didn't understand lol.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing (you're my very first!, so double thanks are in order! haha)! Yes, that is exactly how I was hoping to portray Draco in this story, so I'm really glad that's what you got out of this. I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

And McGriddles are part of McDonald's breakfast menu. They have these pancake-like buns with tiny pockets of syrup in them and are filled with either bacon, egg, and cheese; sausage; and I think sausage and cheese (I may have the fillings wrong). But they are delicious! :) yum...

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