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Review #1, by angelchaser13 Poison

11th August 2009:
Oh.*sniffles* Tragically sad but terribly good.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :)

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Review #2, by Jellyman Poison

7th August 2009:
You have a talent, it seems, for building things up and suddenly bringing them crashing down in an instant. Really, this was brilliant. The tale you created about a character that is mentioned in passing (I'm pretty sure, correct me if I'm wrong) was Brilliant, amazing, creative! I'm pretty sure all the other entries for the Staff Challenge I have seen are Bloody Baron/Helena Ravenclaw pieces, so kudos for extreme originality! Really, it was so enjoyable. Well done, great entry!

Author's Response: I'm not going to lie, I'm a sucker for ruining my character's lives. How awful of me. Hehe. Thank you very much! This is the first piece that I've ever been truly terrified to post. I spent a couple hours actually researching the time period (that was for another challenge), and then I just wrote and wrote. It took me so much longer than usual, and when I was done, I was like, "Huh?" But I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks, as always, Jelly!

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Review #3, by CrazyForYou Poison

6th August 2009:
Uh wow. You have a great writing style, but I'll concede you have a point, when in your summary you wonder what you were thinking. Haha, it's not a bad story, on the contrary, I'd say it is well written, but your plot

I found myself rather captivated by the character of Charlotte. She experiences so many highs and lows in her life. But I felt the ending was...well, I'm not sure. I'm torn between predictable and disappointing. I liked Charlotte too much to want her to die, but at the same time, I knew she was going to.

Well, I'm rambling here, but great writing and connection to the characters even if the plot was rather random. Props!

Author's Response: It's a twisty-turny thing of doom, I know that, haha. I had to kill her, though. Ghosts are born of violent deaths, so her death was inevitable. I'm glad that you liked her enough to care about her death, though. Thanks for the review! :)

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Review #4, by Jen Poison

29th July 2009:
No... You absolutely did NOT get this wrong... I thought it was brilliant - an inspired piece of work... and a little outside of the norm - that's a good thing, trust me. I think you should be very proud of this piece. If you are seriously thinking of deleting it, please don't.

Author's Response: Ohh, oops! I totally misunderstood me! Thank you then! I'm sorry that I got it wrong :[

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Review #5, by Jen Poison

28th July 2009:
Umm... OK. I was thinking this was a charming little piece of fluff (I forgot about the bit at the top)... Great ending - quite bizarre, but very well done. I think. My head's a bit twisted by it actually.

Author's Response: Ehh, I was afraid that I'd gone over the edge with this one. Oh, well. Can't get 'em all right. Thanks for the review, though! :)

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