this story is okay. there's alot of grammatical errors. i hope there's moreAuthor's Response: yeah i know im not the best at that.. sorry im trying to get better though :) .. thanks for the review :) Report Review
You seriously need to get yourself a beta! You can ask for a beta in the forums. Your language mistakes make it hard to understand the story, but I think you could improve with a beta.
Don't give up on your writing!Author's Response: i know i doo and im mega sorry :( i dont have an acount for the forums and when i try to get one it says there not taking any more :( . so i will just have to try and improve :) ... thanks for the review though x Report Review
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