Oh, I like it so far. You should keep going. I think you're being very true to Draco's character, although Blaise and Pansy don't seem the same. Maybe I'm just not used to them acting like friends instead of Slytherins. Report Review
lol that was a nice read!
i like to read something light and fluffy every few days, so this did the trick!
can't wait to see where it's headed! :D
except, the part when you mentioned what basil was wearing. when i saw 'aeropostale' i sort of frowned. sorry! i don't like american brands in HP fan fiction! :)Author's Response: awww, thank you so much... It's kind of hard to write light fluffiness, actually, because I'm so used to writing blood and death and blah, blah, blah...
*wince* sorry about the aeropostale... not going to make excuses for that one; it was just stupid... lol. forgive...?! Report Review
you've got some good ideas, and your story keeps me reading...usually i don't make it past the first chapter. keep writing because this seems like a good thing in the making. :DAuthor's Response: awww :] thank you, that's sweet. i might not be able to update this story terribly quickly, though; I have a lot to do this term... Report Review
LOL, love the chapter title and Basil as a char. Draco's situation is interesting and I want to read more. I'll be waiting for ur next update! Report Review
I could see this story becoming interesting, but unfortunately your description of the story makes it seem as if you don't care about it.Author's Response: LOL, sorry about that. I'll go back and change it if it seems like a deterrent. Thanks for the review! xD Report Review
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