Okay...Very original plot, but I think you need to add some more detail to the story. You have a very good foundation, you just need to add some more framework. But, that's only my opinion ;)Author's Response: thank you!
i agree, i should probably go back and fix some things if i find the time :] Report Review
i just copied your chapter name for my name, i hope that's okay. i don't usually comment like this, but i really like this chapter and i hope you continue the story. thanks, bye! 10/10Author's Response: thank you! and i love the title name, what can i say :] Report Review
This story is really good!!! Please don't give up on it and post a new chapter soon!!Author's Response: thank you :] Report Review
I really like the idea for this story, but I'm kind of lost on the whole dumbledore-taking-books-out thing. Was that in the books?Author's Response: si, 'twas in the books. it's in the 7th one though, hopefully i didn't spoil you! Report Review
me likes, me loves, me favorites
104385941/10Author's Response: hahaha well, thank you :] Report Review
i really really like this story so plz update soonAuthor's Response: thanks for the review :] Report Review
Really ace story. Keep up the brilliance. 10/10Author's Response: thank you!! :] Report Review
LoveLoveLove!! Author's Response: thank you so much :] Report Review
Fantastic! wow, this is totally unique - i've never seen anything like this before. :]
please update soon!
bazillion/10Author's Response: thanks, girl!
and thanks for reviewing :] Report Review
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