AW he's a cutie!!! Can't wait for more! It's been way too long! :)Author's Response: i know right...sorry it took so long, life has been getting in the way and i had to fix some stuff for validation purposes Report Review
That was so sad! Good though, I loved it, I absolutely love maurauder fics! lol.Author's Response: i know it was rather depressing...marauder fics are pretty awesome :)...im trying to get the next chapter up, but it was rejected at first for a couple words, but it should be up soon...it is becoming harder to find time to write, life is getting in the way :(
thank you so much for the review, it means the world to me :P Report Review
this was a bit of a filler chapter, but good all the same. you might want an editer for this one. i spotted a few mistakes in the over-all.
well, upgrade soon,
-Nickole.Author's Response: you're right, it was a tad bit of a filler chapter...and i guess you might consider the next one that i will post also a filler, but i guess it just depends on the reader.thank you for responding, it means a lot to me Report Review
Another good chapter can't wait for the next one :)Author's Response: thank you so much for sticking to the story and reviewing...if you're interested in a Rose/Scorpius fic, i have one of those waiting to be validated as we speak...thanks again for reviewing, it means so much to me...i am glad you enjoy this fic :) Report Review
Aww this is so sad. I am nearly crying. I can't live if I lost my family. I nearly lost my sister and that was another for me. This is great, I can't wait to read more. So in other less suttle words update soon, please.
10/10 :)Author's Response: I don't think I would live if I lost my family either, it would be terrible. *snifs* I am glad that you are ready to read more, however the site is shutting down for about 9 days in a week so it might be a while before the next update. I am so sorry that you almost lost your sister. :'(
Your review means so much to me, thank you. Report Review
this is a really sad story! waiting for and upgrade, and adding to fav's, aNd hoping for a maybe lighter chapter two,
( i know, i sure am demading, aren't i? hehe! )Author's Response: i know that this is a sad way to start out the story, but if my writing classes have taught me anything then i know that i need a good attention grabber in the beginning...the next chapter is being written as we speak and should be up in about a week...it won't be as sad..i promise...thanks for reviewing, it means a lot to me Report Review
Really good! Powerful emotions.
Do update as soon as you can ^_^
10Author's Response: i will dont worry...i am going to try and write another chapter tonight and get it validated asap...im glad you like the story :)...your review means a lot to me Report Review
Oh no! That's a slightly depressing way to start a story but it's gotten me interested lol. Keep updating :)Author's Response: i know its sad, but i felt it would be a good attention grabber, (writing class has taught me something)...dont worry i will update soon :)..your review means so much thanks Report Review
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