6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by emerald_princess92 Happy birthday, Harry Love Hermione

5th May 2007:
Its great! I like it! The only problem is the spacing between paragraphs made it hard to read. Other than that it was good. Rating: 8/10 -1 for spelling mistakes it took away from the story. -1 for no spaciong in between paragraph.

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Review #2, by mr & mrs potter Happy birthday, Harry Love Hermione

30th October 2006:
I really hop that there is going to be a sequel to this

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Review #3, by sugarsweet Happy birthday, Harry Love Hermione

12th March 2006:
brilliant, this story was sooo funny, i hope to see the next chapter soon luv lulu

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Review #4, by ambsee Happy birthday, Harry Love Hermione

27th July 2005:
I'm sorry, but I found this story...bad. It's just the following: the events that happen are absolutely childish, you can't write 'straight' correctly, and you pack several paragraphs together so that they are nearly impossible to read. I would recommend a beta-reader to help you out, and that you think more before thrwing yourself into a childish story about 'kiddies...'

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Review #5, by preciouslily Happy birthday, Harry Love Hermione

4th January 2004:
that was funny!!! but why all the sex things??!! that was VERY funny. how come harry only knew his parents for a little while?? lilianna

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Review #6, by Potterluverfan Happy birthday, Harry Love Hermione

31st July 2003:
Um...it\'s alright I guess...kinda lame. Nothing is really happening...i\'ll keep readin\' though, but I hope a story line imerges outta this.

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