So sweet! I love it! Please write more J/L!!!Author's Response: Yeah, I should write more J/L :( Maybe another songfic soon? I have to think about it. Report Review
loved it :D
10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much ^_^ Report Review
aww wow this was awesome! i'm so happy now! i am SUCH a sucker for lily/james stories. lovin the major-fluff attack. i liked it when james said 'you blush like a virgin.' they're just so funny.
i also thought it was great that they got engaged while naked haha.
you are a really great author!Author's Response: Aww, thank you :) I'm glad you liked it. I'm major sucker for fluff too - atleast lately xD Report Review
ooh loving the fluff :) the beginning is adorable, with her being all worried. i love how you've encorporated the motor bike polic hting into this
the middle was hilarious. i love their argument of James being denied his "lily sugar". and of course i am amazed that they somehow manage to bring James mother into a conversation about sex. well i suppose everyone has their talents...
and the ending. you should put a warning that major sqealing may ensue. ridiculously adorable! somehow you've made it sooo romantic and perfectly cute, and there are no scattered rose petals of serenading (thank god for that)!! i loved it :)Author's Response: Haha :D Thanks for the amazing review! Yes, I'm talented in the most weirdest things :P So, thanks again for reading, liking and reviewing ^_^ Report Review
Awww! That was so sweet! I really liked it, it would have made a good WIP if it was laid out more slowly, but short stories are cute too! Thanks so much for posting this story, it made my day !! :)Author's Response: I never intended to write this story at all. I've found it rather rewarding to write one-shots, because you don't have to think about what to put in which chapter, how to keep it flowing with each and every chapter, you know? So yeah, this was always supposed to be a one-shot, maybe the first part of a one-shot series, like my "Teddy & Victoire" stories :) Report Review
Aw! Super super LJ fluff! Hurrah!
I loved the reference to the police officers... I'm actually writing a fic involving them right now!Author's Response: Thank you :) I've always wanted to include that little story in somewhere, but it never really fit into any of my other stories, so I thought I'd write a super fluffy story and blend that in there :D Anyway, can't wait to read yours - I like your stories a lot :) Report Review
i always love overly fluffy stories and this one was perfect. well done!
Dilys :)Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
I loved this!!
Ah, I do love a bit of James and Lily fluff after work :)
Your characterisation was perfect, the way they teased each other was lovely.
You also balanced the mix of serious adults, fighting in a war with 'horny teenagers' (your words not mine!) very well.
10/10 :DBAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks! :D I'm happy to hear you liked it - it was a nice change to write some easy fluff ^_^ Report Review
Very cute and fluffy, loved it.Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
great fic u have here. u could write a fic about Lily giving birth to Harry. this is just an idea. keep up the great work please.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: That's a great idea, I'll get right to it. Report Review
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