Reading Reviews for Ever's Tears
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Review #1, by JeanSyrotS Auntie Ever

25th February 2010:
he he, val I like this angst, darker side fo you. :)

I think it's kewl that Ever has a facination in the greyer shade of things and I want to know more about her work...

He he and French partnerts...inevitable...

Oh but poor Remus! :(

Hurray! Neville! lol

cute, James and Lily

aaand, her father, yes yes, I'm expecting you to elaborate :) So far I'm getting this mafia feel for the that night was when he found out what they were? so my mind is going like a mile a minute and I just had a brilliant thought: is there an organization of muggles that 'eliminates' wizards? or am I just jumping to conclusions.

And i noticed you deleated stories...Decering casiopia?...also I like that one with Draco.are they just in editing...or...?

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Review #2, by JeanSyrotS Beautiful Christmas

19th November 2009:
Hey Val, so u gonna update this one?!?! :D

Alrighty, a review.
Positive: Amazing Idea. Fabulous Name for "Ever Lee".

Negative: Sometiems when people talk it dosen't seem like what someone would really say...

It's wierd I'm always harsher on here for some reason,
but remember, i haven'f forgotten all those times looking farward to reading your 'notebook' stories sunday afternoons..

Keep writng girl!

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Review #3, by crookshanks1545 Beautiful Christmas

11th August 2009:
I think this is well written. It's a good introduction to the character. Yes, i do think she is kind of hard to understand, I don't really understand her personality, but it is the first chapter so I'm sure it will unfold. It's a solid beginning, good job.

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Review #4, by irish_blue69 Beautiful Christmas

23rd July 2009:
I just found your story and found it most enjoyable. I would appreciate it if you could update it as soon as you can. I think that the way Sage speaks is perfect for her character.

Author's Response: Awww, thanks love! It means the world to me to have you say that. :) I shall update soon!


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Review #5, by HarryPotter1000 Beautiful Christmas

23rd July 2009:
This definitely has potential! I like the idea of writing about the old order of the pheonix, it's really interesting. I like how Sage speaks in a sophisticated context and so far she does not sound like a Mary Sue. I'd watch your spelling however, "Griffindor" is spelled Gryffindor. Everything else is great! I'll definitely continue reading:)

Author's Response: Yay! She's not a Mary Sue... I'll be careful to keep it that way. ^_&

Thanks so much for the lovely review! And I appreciate your spell check. *whistles* I need to find myself a beta. ;)


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Review #6, by emilie hope Beautiful Christmas

23rd July 2009:
I like it so far! The only thing I'd complain about is that 'Dorcus' is actually spelled 'Dorcas'.

Not sure about the sophisticated context, but I can certainly live with it. She seems like a very interesting character that could go far.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks a ton, love. Gah, how could I spell Dorcas wrong? -I'm sorry for that mistake, and I thank you for pointing it out!

Thanks so much for your wonderful review!


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