Haha I wouldve done that on purpose or I wouldve been like "Boy!" and punched him but, hey that's the way the cookie crumbles! Haha :)
I love this story so far! Update soon?:) Report Review
I love Alicia to. Really, she is just so nice. Wood is a prat as always, but someone always is. That is always a downer on things. I felt what she was thinking when she was standing in the doorway. A never ever situation ... never ever talk while walking while holding a bundle of books while chewing bubble gum. You are likely to have the gum fall out while you are talking, then just try and keep walking, then get your shoe stuck on the gum and trip (face forward) on to the ground, sending books flying everywhere. No of course that hasn't happened to me . *cough cough*
Keep writing, Hugs
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ahhaha its good :D i didnt think oliver was so evil tho.. Report Review
good, but check for spelling errors. :) Report Review
Ha, Karma indeed. The ending made me laugh. Knocking Wood off his seat with a piece of meat.
I went on google and it came up with these:
Wear your pajamas to class.
Run up the stairs, shrieking hysterically, and when you reach the top, fall silent and glare at other people coming up them as if they are crazy.
Notice someone with their trouser zip undone and hold up a piece of paper that says in large letters "CHECK YOUR FLY".
Wink at the class professor every few minutes.
I look forward to reading more,
Dee, xAuthor's Response:
Im glad my chapter made you laugh
so did your review
some of those are absolute classics
thank you soo much... for the review and the ideas
I'm glad you are enjoying my story
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I really like this! ;)
I hope you continue soon!
I'll update as soon as i possibly can Report Review
I like your story, I can see it going far :]
I'll probably stick around.
"Never ever carry around a wet lolipop" ? Lol. I dunno >.>Author's Response:
Haha i like that
That may just get used thank you
Im glad you enjoyed the story
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He he love it.
Evil stepmums are awesome in the hate way. I wonder if that is the infamous Oliver Wood she landed on. And if it isn't, i'm sure Ollie is going to be in the next one. I wonder which house she is going to be in? Ravenclaw or Gryffindor I reckon. Can't wait for the next chappie, Kepp writing
thanks heaps for the review
i love hearing your thoughts
and im glad you enjoyed it so much
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hahah, i love it xD
keep writing please (:Author's Response:
i'll post the next chapter soon Report Review
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