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Review #1, by lilyluna2014

9th August 2009:

hahah, i love this story!! update pwetty pwease??? lol

I can't wait to see what you have for the next chapter :)
Rating: 10/10!

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Review #2, by zello818

The Not So Smooth Proposal

5th August 2009:

some of the formatting's a little awkward and there are some typos but otherwise this was a solid start to what looks like its going to be a great story.

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Review #3, by Peaches and Pie

The Not So Smooth Proposal

5th August 2009:

LOL I thought you were going to have Ginny tell Harry she's pregnant or something. Good story and well done. 10/10

Peaches and Pie

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Review #4, by David Shadel

The Not So Smooth Proposal

4th August 2009:

not a bad start. looking forward to more

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Review #5, by mrsharrypotter28

The Not So Smooth Proposal

4th August 2009:

really really good! post the next one soon!

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Review #6, by Harry and Ginny

The Not So Smooth Proposal

4th August 2009:

great start 4 the 1st chapter however i found some mistakes.
1. sitting her asking myself - sitting here asking myself
2. reading too him - reading to him
3. sitting in the breakfast nook looking at pictures of Ted - sitting in the breakfast looking at pictures of Teddy
4. butter beer - butterbeer
5. she 's pregnant - she's pregnant
6. way to vulnerable - way too vulnerable
7. we have bee married - we have been married

i hope i could help u. i can't wait to read the next chapter. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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