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Review #1, by rougette The train ride

30th August 2009:
I wanted to let you know that you spelled "children" wrong on the story's title...it's only suppose to have one "L". I like the beginning of this story. If you ever need some help or someone to look over your chapter before you post, let me know. I'd be glad to help! (:

Author's Response: Thanks for the spelling correction. I appreciate the offer too! I appreciate your review sence I haven't had any other's than yours. I would have appreciated a review on the actuall story too, to see if I am actually a good writer. But, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for the review!

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