Wow, this is good, the first chapter, Lucie is drunk and wants to have sex with Sirius? I got a tad confused and the second chapter is good, I really love this side to Sirius, rebellious and smoking...ah he sounds hot ;) Report Review
Ooooh interesting!!! This is good stuff keep it up! :) Report Review
erm, this is a very filler chapter. Report Review
Hmmm interesting, can't wait for the next one! :) Report Review
a rather good beginning, you have a wonderful writing style and you have introduced the characters very well. from the summary i like the plot and i can't wait to read more of it so keep writing and update soon. Dilys :) p.s just the one typo i noticed: first line '...the thing curtains...' to be pedantic... Report Review
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