Reading Reviews for Tonight is the Night you Died
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Review #1, by WriterPlatinum The Crying Doesn't Stop

17th July 2009:
This story is a little short, but short stories are... short.

I like the vocabulary and the grammar, I didn't spot any mistakes. It took me a little time to work out it was Fred from his point of view and not George.

I'm not entirely sure why there's an OC character, I didn't spot any.

Overall, great story. 10/10.

Author's Response: Thanks! The oc was a just in case, I had a friend who couldn't figure it out :p

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