WOAA...you made me cry:(...I love Lucius so much...he's my favourite character from Harry Potter. Your story was good...I felt as if I was watching it from somewhere...I loved it.

Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: well thank you so much. it makes me happy to know that someone else loves lucius as much as i do. :) thanks for the review.

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Awesome! I've never read anything where Lucius was a good guy and you wrote it really well!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've always liked to think of Lucius as a good guy, so I wrote this. I'm glad you liked it.

-Chelsea

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Wow! I loved it! That was so sad. Brilliant the way you did the memories! Great job! One thing I would change, even though it would make it unbearably sad, would be when he's saying 'I don't know Dad. I'm really nervous' right before the wedding, I think he should have said that to his father's grave. So it would be very depressing. But, I think it would make more of an impact to the reader, you know? But anyways, great job. I loved it.

~Victoria

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad that you liked it.
And ya I do see what you mean. And I agree, that would make a bigger impact.

-Chelsea

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I love this song, and I love the whole father/son relationship in this oneshot. Good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I love the Malfoys and wanted to put them in good light.
I'm glad you liked it.

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