this such a beautiful story, i could cry! *sniff* :'S really! i love it so much!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was going for emotion, I guess I got it. Thank you for reading! Report Review
loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved itAuthor's Response: i'm glad you loved it! Don't you just love Ron? Thank you for the review! Report Review
Absolutely love it!
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wow i've never really thought about fred and hermione as a couple, but it sounds quite sweet and obviously tragic. fred didn't deserve to die DD: the language you used really set the mood and tone of the piece. i also loved ron's memory, because it's exactly the type of thing i would imagine the twins doing. fantastic job :)Author's Response: I actually think that Fred/Hermione is one of my favorite non-canon pairings. I feel your pain about Fred. The twins are some of my absolute favorite characters. Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
“They’re actually in one of my first memories…” Ron started, telling Hermione about how Fred and George had convinced Ron he was actually adopted, and the ghoul in the attic was his real father, and how Mrs. Weasley found him in the attic crying, and how Fred and George weren’t allowed dessert for a month after that.
This paragraph was just so perfect! It's exactly the type of thing Fred and George would do!
Anyway, you got all the characters so perfectly well in this. They're all believable and true to the real thing. Ron's loyalty is so endearing and really sets the entire base of his character.
This story was so sad and sweet! I loved it :)
TheDirigiblePlumAuthor's Response: I always imagined Fred and George being mischievous from a young age! And I just love Ron, most people only see him as the goofy best friend of Harry, but he's so much more! Thank you so much for the review! Report Review
I really liked that immensely cute, and sad. I like Hermione and Fred as a couple I think they balance each other out quite nicely.Author's Response: I think the same thing. Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
Awww... it's cute. I love the song, that's what grabbed my attention. :]Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
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