What's with the weird words in the last few chapters? Like puppies instead of eyes, eyebrow in some words, banana instead of wondering, etc.? can you fix this? It's really confusing otherwise

Author's Response: It wasn't me, it was the website, they did some strange thing with my stories, actually everybody's stories and THEY need to fix them, not me, since I tried and it doesn't work. They used some kind of program to change words out for April Fool's yesterday and they need to change it back. I guess they haven't done it yet for all my stories.

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loving the story so far, but Merlin this chapter is hard to read. It appears that you typed it in some form of program that corrects words automatically. Took me a while to decipher. But still, good story and im enjoying it immensely.

Author's Response: This was NOT me it was the website doing a joke for April Fool's and changing words like a Mad Lib game. Hopefully they'll fix it soon!

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Ah Harry I dream of beating the procrarstinating Fudge into a pulp some nights.

Author's Response: So do I! He's such an idiot!

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I literally threw up when I read about the dagger of Discord.

Author's Response: Me too, and I wrote it! That thing is nasty!

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I have simply fallin in love with your stories and would love to see the sequel to this... I never truly liked Snape before but you have changed my view on him totally from a snarky a** to a misunderstood saviour! Keep on writing.

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Q: What did you think of Harry & Meadowsweet here? Would you like to see them become a couple?

A: Yes Yes Yes Hell yes!

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AH-MAZING! I really loved your story! The way you draw a reader in! You are totally awesome! :D

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I have some small companion pieces to this, one called The Greatest Gift and the other called Worth Saving.

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Did you write the sequel? Pleasee doo , i really would like to read more :)

Author's Response: No, I haven't yet.

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i love this series so much pls write a sequel!

Author's Response: Thanks! I will start to work on it soon.

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why didn't they use their amulets to communicate?

Author's Response: Because Harry wasn't wearing his since he was in a Muggle neighborhood and didn't think he'd need it.

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couple? yes way, like ten times over!!!

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Hi I totally love your stories and this is in fact the second time I'm reading this story and now I noticed that your third spell the Firestorm in order to be gramatically correct in Latin it would sound better if you wrote Incendia Tempestate since you got the Incendia part good but Tempestate literally means Storm in latin I just thought you should know but no sweat its still a great story though I wanted to make a friendly suggestion

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This story was excellant, I know you wrote it a while ago, but it is never too late for a sequel, would love to see what happens w/severus and his lady friend, ginny's jealousy and who knows what else.

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Excellant vacation, the way Dumbledor acted was very believable, very interesting and good story

Author's Response: Thanks glad you liked the vacation. That was fun for me to write, as well as poor Sev, who ended up embarrassed about all of it.

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excellant chapter, never did like fudge, should be interesting what happens

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that chapter was so cute, I could really see dumbledore being like that

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that was truly an excellant chapter, the way you described the ritual was really good

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excellant chapter, excellant story, haven't been reviewing all chapters, but they are all great, i like harry falling in love

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this has been an excellant story so far, really enjoying int.

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excellant chapter, definately looking forward to read the rest.

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Great story and nice chapter also. Good to finally hear the details about Thea! :)

One small note on the timeline: Cell phones weren't really "common place" items in 1996, and I suspect very few children, if any, had them. Also, in 1995/19966, cameras were just starting to appear in cell phones and were fairly rare. Guess we'll let this one slide since we love your stories so much!!! ;)

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I have read this series I don't know how many times now and each time I fall more in love with it :-D I was wondering though if you have done another one for this series if so I haven't found it yet and dying to see where this all goes

Author's Response: No, not a large sequel yet. I am reworking some of the plot for it and the details. But I do have two small stories that are companion pieces. They are The Greatest Gift and Worth Saving.

Thanks for reading and re-reading my work. I really appreciate it, especially now that I am so depressed from watching Severus die in DH2.

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You should write a sequel

Author's Response: I am planning one. In the meantime, you could read my follow-up small stories to this, one is called The Greatest Gift and the other is called Worth Saving.

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sev should kill him Lol
just kiddin... or was i

Author's Response: Well, I hope you were! LOL!

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i giv u a hi-5. plz write more abt vlad, darkmoon, meadowsweet, hedwig, freedom, warrior, paul, jilly nd othrs. u r my fav author. u can chck my stories. my username is The Indian Patriot. u r my inspiration. thanx dearest snapegirl. i hav read Broken Wings nd Two Hawks Hunting twice, almst at one go in d second tym. for both the stories, i giv u 100/10 , ok? wel, i lykd Severus, bt thnx 2 u, now i simply LUV Sev. thanx, once more.

Author's Response: Thanks! That's really sweet of you. I do have some small sequels to Two Hawks Hunting called The Greatest Gift and Worth Saving. I'm really happy that you love Severus. I think he's an amazing character.

I tried to find you on here, but the search author list came back with no matches found.

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