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Review #1, by teh tarik Broken Comfort

18th April 2013:
Hello there! This is a really interesting story, and a gripping first chapter. So much happens here, and there's so much mystery about Percy and Audrey's past. I haven't read many Percy/Audrey thrillers, so I'm so pleased to come across your story. Although of course, Audrey is dead D:

I think you really captured Percy's sense of unease well, though it does take him a long time to react to the cloaked men following him and all. It's certainly strange to see Lucius Malfoy and other Death Eaters still being their old Death-Eaterly selves so late after the way. I wonder what it is that Percy did for Audrey 19 years ago.

Goodness, this is a great beginning! I do hope you continue :)

-teh

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