{reviewid: 2709837, reviewer: 'Jen'}
18th June 2012:
I love it so far!! Please write more! X
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{reviewid: 2300357, reviewer: 'queenflora09'}
17th February 2010:
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
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{reviewid: 2300214, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
17th February 2010:
great chapter this one. please update soon!!!^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2300207, reviewer: 'Real_Fantasy'}
17th February 2010:
great improvement!
im so hooked now i cant wait for the next chapter
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{reviewid: 2300203, reviewer: 'Real_Fantasy'}
17th February 2010:
hey, its coming along great so far, however, there are a couple of issues.
the first is that the punctuation is making the story hard to read. you have a sentence in one line and cutting down on the "ands" would help too.
the second is that i dont know whose point of view it is and if it changes from harry's to ginny's or if its all harry.
its still a great story and with improvement will attract more readers. :)
ps. im sorry for sounding so critical...i hope you don't take it personally, im always like this with my friends. Sorry :)
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{reviewid: 2282681, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
11th January 2010:
a bit confusing this chapter because u need to add more spaces between the sentences but i hope to read the next chapter soon.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2282602, reviewer: 'queenflora09'}
11th January 2010:
Great chapter! Can't wait for the rest!
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{reviewid: 2263454, reviewer: 'nani'}
6th December 2009:
the storie isn't bad for a first one but you still have a lot to improve... hope you do;)
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{reviewid: 2170393, reviewer: 'queenflora09'}
22nd July 2009:
i REALLY likes it and hope that you keep going!
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{reviewid: 2170268, reviewer: 'hannah'}
22nd July 2009:
its a bit sloppy and doessnt make much sense at the end but it has a good plot so far tings are actuallly happeninng i think when its developed it will be a good story so please keep writing btw im a hg shipper
harry
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{reviewid: 2170114, reviewer: 'elizabeth'}
21st July 2009:
Please write the next chapter!
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{reviewid: 2169847, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
21st July 2009:
great start 4 the 1st chapter but u don't need to add space between a sentence. u also wrote "re head" when it should be "red-hair". if u need help or something else, u can check my stories. anyway. Harry has a tough program 4 his summer. my guess is that he likes Ginny and will do anything to let her notice his feelings towards her. will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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