Reading Reviews for Stars' Silent Laughter
  
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Happy Birthday One

17th March 2011:
Rin, this was spectacular. You truly describe the character's emotions of what they are experiencing in such a way that makes the reader really relate to what is happening at that moment to that character. I felt the character's agony as they struggled with the pain they were in, while coming to terms with the realization that they were still alive and it didn't matter what else was happening around her because she was just glad she was not dead like many others. And the prose this was written in flowed like poetry, simply divine. Excellent job and keep writing! XD 10/10

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I honestly have not read/touched this fiction in quite a while, so I'm very thrilled that it was decent to read even after all this time. :)

Thank you so much for the review. Your feedback and praise, coming from whoever you are, is really lovely to read. It is very much appreciated!


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Review #2, by Phoenix_Flames One

20th July 2009:
Oohh, my gosh! Rin, this was amazing!

When I saw your title, this wasn't exactly the kind of mood I was expecting for your challenge entry, but wow did you make it soar in talent and wonder. It was amazing.

You managed to get every single emotion and action right. I could feel everything, see, and hear. They didn't need dialogue. Not many authors can achieve that, but you did it no problem. I don't see how you had to re-write certain areas so many times. This is just perfect!

Well done!

10/10

Author's Response: DRUE! I'm so sorry I didn't answer this sooner!

Thank you so much for everything you said up there! I was kind of unsure about this one-shot because it took me so long to write, so your review was very encouraging! I'm really pleased you liked the emotions. :D

God, thank you so much - Again!
- rin


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Review #3, by Canary in the Mine One

13th July 2009:
Rin. You've done it. I swear, you have this amazing superfulicious ability to allure the reader with your words and sentence structure. I adore your descriptions and fig-lang, it's just amazing. You totally owned the ability to not have any spoken dialogue. I love it, I really do.

The overall plot here, was just amazing. I like how you had it set in the battle, from a girl's point of view. I understand how she feels in a way, while reading this peice, and I like knowing that a writer could acheive that (:

This was short, but it just seemed perfect. If you were to take out any sentence, word even, I'd think it was incomplete. This was just perfect, really. The overall idea. I mean, a few sentences there, and it almost seemed as if I were watching from a distance.

I love everything about this. The fact that you had a canon character, like Hermione, in this was just amazing.

I also love how in the beginning, it seemed that she didn't care to live, she was ready for death to take over her. But throughout the short peice, she had found the will to live - throughout the pain - and just...lived. I thought that it was nice and comforting to read, you know?

Anyhow, wonderful job. Amazing, spectacular, and jsut overall perfection. I loved it (:

10/10

Author's Response: Omigosh! I\\\'m... not quite sure how to respond! I\\\'m flattered. Really, I am. And... not sure what to say now!

Short things are my weakness, really. I just can\\\'t seem to lengthen things. Also, this was written on paper, and I\\\'m sure if you\\\'ve ever written something on paper and then typed it up, you realize it\\\'s shorter than it really was. :)

I\\\'m so, so glad you enjoyed it! Especially coming from an author like you, that means quite a lot. I mean really... I\\\'m just... flattered. Thank you so much! You\\\'ve absolutely made my month.


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Review #4, by padme_alejandra One

11th July 2009:
This was really pretty, in a moving, sad sort of poetic way :) I really enjoyed this and your style of writing!

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\\\'m glad you enjoyed it. :)

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