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Review #1, by Pretty Purple Pelican Into Tomorrow

15th August 2009:
Very interesting. I'm not usually one for stories that are without dialogue, but you did a nice job with descriptions on this. I think, although it stands very well as it is, you could've even gone into a little more detail of their life together- what those smiles and everything were. It just seems a little lacking in life there. Your words are very poetic, though. Nice job!

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