this has got to be my very fav chpter! it rocks...can't wait for more...xx

10/10

Author's Response: thanks XD the next chappie will be up soon - Babyshel x

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hey i aint arguing can u put the other chapters on ere i loved ur story i want to read the finished version and theres more family guy well new family guy x

Author's Response: yh i guess i can soon anyways - Babyshel

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I love this story... and the name david.

Author's Response: thanks for the review - Babyshel x

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the imagery frm this story is awesome i lov it and the fact that u based a evil charecter on me u no me so well lolu should ave like a rely dogey twist at the end like puttin david and lily 2gether x

Author's Response: yh well yu r evil lol, i might put david n lilly 2gether i dunno ill see n thanks 4 the review hun - Babyshel x

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Love this story and good plot. Can't wait for the next chapter :D

Author's Response: thanks the next chapter will be up soon im already writting chapter 12 - Babyshel x

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I love this story so far. Its really good :D

Author's Response: thanks, will be updating soon - Babyshel x

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Hey nice story. I really like it. However I would try a spell check next time as the dark lord was spelle the dark lard a few times. Update soon.
~Pandora

Author's Response: thanks i didn't notice i spelt in wrong lol, and i will be updating as soon as i can i already have written 12 chapters and i can't wait to hear what everyone thinks of them. thanks for the review - Babyshel x

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