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Review #1, by Lil_Miss_James_Black The Man With the Motorbike

26th August 2010:
This is really good! Update soon!

Author's Response: Hey! It's you again! Hello :) Thanks for the review.

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Review #2, by rachm34 The Man With the Motorbike

14th August 2009:
hi hi hi hi hi!
my dearie, Why didn't you tell me you have wrote something new?!?!?! I LOVE IT! i love you too!! :)

I am a little confused but I think that is part of the reason why i love it. The confusion you get as a reader helps you understand, and makes you want to read more. It draws you in more. I love your descriptions and the parts about the man on the motorbike. Great work so far!

love ittt!
10/10

Author's Response: Hey Rach :)
I ... uh, OH GOSH. I didn't tell you! What a ad person. Though to my credit I gave you the summarY. Hahaha. Thanks dearie :)

xx Laura


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Review #3, by harrylilyjames The Man With the Motorbike

14th August 2009:
I think Lily Clark is actually Lily Potter but Ginny remarried. Am I right? Because Harry ran away and left Ginny all by herself.
Oh god! Now that I think about it, this is really sad but it's the precise thing I was looking for. Something different.
Just one thing I would like to point out, in the beginning paragraph, you said 'rode' instead of 'road'...easy mistake. =]
Please update asap! I am dying to read more!

Author's Response: Hm, well... close, but not :) Hahaha.
You'll find out one day... probably.
Oh! Thanks, I'll go and fix that. Thank you very much. I'll update when I get my life back :P Thanks for your review!


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Review #4, by elegantphoenix The Man With the Motorbike

19th July 2009:
...more intrigued than confused, actually. :) the chapter flowed nicely and i liked the description and characterization in this chapter. i saw a few spelling mistakes here and there but overall it was a good start.

keep writing !

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It was a bit of a rough draft, I'll admit XD I was just so eager to get it posted. Thank you again!

:)


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