I have just finished reading this and I think you are really good at writing and the story was hot and interesting. I'm glad you are doing a sequel because this doesn't feel like the end to the story. First when I read the end I thought that it was bad that Finn and Molly should stay together but now I have thought about it and I like that it didn't end like most storys do and that it show that the first love for the most part doesn't last because seventeen is not old and so much more of life is left. I will enjoy reading the sequel :)Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much. I'm really happy you enjoyed the story and I hope you enjoy the sequel, Because I Love You, too (first 10 chapters are currently posted). Thanks so much for reading! :D Report Review
Aw, poor Molly! So much for Finn maturing. Their relationship reminds me a lot of James and Lily, before they started dating. What Finn did to the potion was truly mean, though. And now they're both punished for it, despite the fact that it wasn't Molly's fault. I'm sure that detention will be interesting.
I'm even more intrigued by Percy now! I always thought he'd be a strict father, but getting angry over one detention? That seems a bit much, although it doesn't surprise me that Percy would. I hope he doesn't find out! Great chapter! :)Author's Response: Yes, I can see how Finn and Molly's relationship could model James and Lily's own relationship. Finn eventually comes around to accepting his feelings for Molly, and Molly in turn falls for Finn. Sit back and enjoy the ride because Molly & Finn's relationship is one heck of a roller coaster ride. :D
Yeah, Percy is strict and he puts more pressure on Molly because he sees himself in her and knows how intelligent she is, as well as how far she can succeed and thus pushes her to do her utmost best. Molly's whole character revolves around how her father pushes her and throughout her final year she's trying to find herself by finding what it is she wants to do instead of what her father wants her to do after Hogwarts. Thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
Yay, more Finn! I have a really hard time disliking him, despite the fact that Molly dislikes him at this point. I guess that's what happens when I know the plot before I read the story. Oh, well! I'm really glad that he and Molly had a civil conversation.
I also can't wait to read more about Erin and Mathis. They strike me as very similar to Ron and Hermione, the way they argue, so perhaps something is happening there? Maybe? Another great chapter! :)Author's Response: Yes, knowing the plot definitely can influence how you feel about Finn :P But I'm happy you like him and think Molly is already a well-rounded character :D I love writing both of them so much and Molly is definitely my favorite next generation female to write (James II being my favorite over all).
Yes, Erin and Mathis do have a Hermione and Ron thing going on, however they don't ever go out (though I'm thinking of having them finally start dating in BILY... or maybe I already wrote that they were going out... can't remember, they're at least still best friends in BILY, I can tell you that much, and single). Thanks for reviewing! :D Report Review
Hi Leslie! I am finally reading this! I love the way you've characterized Molly, especially by having her be the only Weasley in Ravenclaw. I can't wait to read more about how that affects her.
Aww, Al's best friends with Scorpius. Such a contrast with how I've characterized both of them. I wonder if they'll be playing a big roll in this story. I'm thinking not, since they're quite a bit younger than Molly.
I'm very intrigued by how you've characterized Neville! I've never seen him written as a stern professor, so it'll be interesting to see how that plays out. Great first chapter! :)Author's Response: Yay! Thanks, I'm glad you like how I've characterized Molly. I love playing around with the dynamic of her character in each scene I write her in because I think she's such a flexible character.
Yes, I went the Albus is a Slytherin route and is therefore best mates with Scorpius. And you'll occasionally see him when I write from Finn's POV, but for the most part he's just scenery in the story as Molly and Finn are at the forefront (and Molly has her own life apart from her family).
Well, I wouldn't say I've characterized Neville as stern per se, but he definitely isn't a professor to be walked over (that's why I end up giving him a promotion to Headmaster in BILY) ;) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Awesome story! I love Molly and Finn so much! Hopefully theyll meet up in Australia when he's curse breaking something and they fall in love shjfjdidnendnsjdAuthor's Response: Well, she's the one that goes to Australia while Finn stays in London, but this is definitely not the end of them as they're reunited in the sequel (which is posted, currently with 10 chapters) titled 'Because I Love You.' Anyway, glad you liked the story and thank you for the review! :) Report Review
This was a fantastic story 10/10 : )Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much for all the reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and Molly and Finn reunite in the sequel (which has 8 chapters currently up). :) I really appreciate the reviews, you're Puffastic! Report Review
Thats a shame. I liked them as a couple 9/10 : )Author's Response: Yes it is, this just wasn't their time as a couple, it'll come in the sequel once they've done a bit more growing up and maturing. Thanks again! Report Review
Oh no. Why couldn't they just try 9/10 : )Author's Response: Yeah, Finn wanted to, but Molly needs to grow up a bit more, that'll come in the sequel. Thanks! Report Review
Molly is such a rebel 9/10 : )Author's Response: Yes, she is. Thanks for reading! Report Review
They are the cutest couple 9/10 : )Author's Response: They are, aren't they? Thanks for reading, glad you're still enjoying it! Report Review
Oh well at least she didn't say no... 9/10 : )Author's Response: Yes, always a positive with Molly and Finn. Thanks for reading! Report Review
I really like how you have written audrey 9/10 : )Author's Response: Thanks, that means a lot since I really worked at developing her character to balance out Percy's. Report Review
Finn is so sweet. 9/10 : )Author's Response: He is sweet, I love writing that Irish lad. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Yay they are friends again 9/10 : )Author's Response: Step by step, that's all you have to take with these two. Thanks for reading! Report Review
I like that molly stood up to her father. 9/10 : )Author's Response: Thanks, I really worked hard on this chapter so I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Finn is adorable. 9/10 : )Author's Response: He is, isn't he. I love writing him, so much fun. Thanks for reading! Report Review
I feel sorry for molly 9/10 : )Author's Response: Yeah, she just doesn't know what she wants. Thanks for reading! Report Review
I like that finn has competition for molly. 9/10 : )Author's Response: A bit of competition, but honestly who could really stand a chance against Finn? He's Finn. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Molly was to quick to forgive 9/10 : )Author's Response: Yes, she was, wasn't she. Thanks! Report Review
Oh no. That could have gone better 9/10 : )Author's Response: Yes, it could have, but where's the fun in that :P Thanks again for reading! Report Review
That was sweet. 9/10 : )Author's Response: Yes, I loved writing all the fluffiness that is this chapter! Thanks again! Report Review
Im glad molly took a chance on finn 9/10 : )Author's Response: All these chances are starting to lead to a trend, aren't they? Thanks for reading! Report Review
I like seeing fins side to this 9/10 : )Author's Response: Yes, there is quite a lot on Finn's mind, too. Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks! Report Review
This was a good chapter 9/10 : )Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate it! Report Review
I'm starting to really like this story 9/10 : )Author's Response: Yay, thank you! Report Review
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