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Review #1, by gredandforge4ever

9th October 2009:

oh. my. god. i could picture james dating other girls and maybe even genuinely loving them, but i never imagined him being engaged to someone else and then imagining his dead ex-fiancee in place of *lily* at the wedding. its too much to even comprehend.poor lily ): all in all tho, amazing story and i give u 10/10 for creativity and beautiful writing, even if i wish that james had at least loved lily

Author's Response: hehe, i'm cruel.
i like tragic stories (:
but thanks so much for the sweet review (:

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Review #2, by Jamesie Poo

Hallie Winters.

23rd August 2009:

Wow. Beautiful. Really, it's amazing!
I just feel sorry for Lily.. and James.
I usually love James/OC fics, but here Hallie is dead so.. it kinda sad.
But I loved it anyway! You write really good :)

Author's Response: awee that's sweet
thanks so much (:

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Review #3, by marauderqueen

Hallie Winters.

1st August 2009:

A nice change. I always got a tad annoyed when I thought of James hung up over Lily when he could have gone out with someone and been happy before Lily.
Loved Sirius and Remus reactions when Hallie and James said that they loved eachother.
marauderqueen
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Author's Response: exactly what i was thinking
thanks so much (:

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Review #4, by ParkerGirl

Hallie Winters.

31st July 2009:

This was beautifully written but incredibly sad =( poor Lily. PG

Author's Response: thank you so much (:
i'm glad you think so

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