not bad.but make it longer and more interesting

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Loved it!!! ;)


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awww ;D thats really cute!

Author's Response: Thank you! =)

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It was pretty good...I liked it at least. I'll probably check in and see what others thought, but I think it is nice. Have you put up any other fics? I'll go check now.

9~10

Check out my one-shot "How Could You" and tell me how it is...if you've got the time.

Author's Response: Thanks. And I'll probably get around to checking out your story sometime, I just don't know when. =)

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I love this story you wrote! The thought that Hermione had known Harry before is perfect! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you! ^^

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awe, this is like the cutest story I have read in a while. It's different because it's based on them BEFORE they go to Hogwarts and there aren't many based in that era..
But I loved every word of it!! It was brilliant.

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you liked it! I adore writing stories like this, when the characters are all young, cute and innocent. I wrote a story similar to this on another fanfiction site a while back for a challenge, and that's what got me started on stuff like this. Thanks again for the review. ^^

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You did a really great job on this. You described the scene well, about Hermione in the spinning chair, about how hot the office was, about Harry's lip. I've always loved the idea of Harry and Hermione meeting as children, but most people would probably spoil it with a Harry/Hermione pairing. So, all in all, great plot and well written. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. And it makes me really happy that you liked my descriptions.

I was actually afraid that people wouldn't take the time to read it because it's rather pointless and there are no pairings (they're too young for that), so I'm really glad that you took the time to review. =)

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