{reviewid: 2764509, reviewer: 'ajharrypotterfan07'}
17th January 2013:
i enjoyed this story. A little shorter chapters than i would have liked but interesting all the same. Good job.
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{reviewid: 2678988, reviewer: 'decembergirl92'}
30th March 2012:
i don't know whether u r going to read this review or not, still i m reviewing the first chap of this story as per your request... just to tell u that i m going to read this story. whether u r connected to HPFF or not but i m connected to this site, so plz dont delete this.
and well of coarse, u write pretty good, thats why i m reading this... so if u r just on a break do try to come back to your writings as soon as possible.
Also its a request that u complete ur other story "Muggles in Hogwarts"
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{reviewid: 2608117, reviewer: 'weaselredhair'}
27th October 2011:
aw glad to see Ron and Hermione are friends.
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{reviewid: 2600201, reviewer: 'Jeremy%20Davis'}
9th October 2011:
one of the best fanfics I have ever read good man good show
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{reviewid: 2549441, reviewer: 'acameron488'}
18th July 2011:
So far, this story seems quite interesting! Amazing that you thought about a story this thurough, good job!
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{reviewid: 2544895, reviewer: 'Lopie'}
10th July 2011:
I really liked this story. I thought of writing one like this before but could never figure out how to manage it. I'm sorry I didn't review before but I started reading and didn't stop till I finished it, it was that good. Awesome story, made me want a sequel.
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{reviewid: 2513629, reviewer: 'faithintheboys'}
25th April 2011:
This is great, btw. It's in character, it's interesting, it's wonderful.
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{reviewid: 2491023, reviewer: 'Thatkewl%3B%29'}
8th March 2011:
Oh that was good! And fairly original. I don't think of seen one like this (though I have read one with Hermione), so congratualitions on not using the same plot as every one else:) well, now I'm gonna read the other 1, so bye 4 now!
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{reviewid: 2485318, reviewer: 'Naala'}
24th February 2011:
Good story! I'm really enjoying it! I just have one comment. You use the name "Jayden" a lot - when you're describing his actions, you seem to start most sentences with Jayden did such and such. Maybe you could replace it with "he" in a couple of places?
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{reviewid: 2453799, reviewer: 'TheProphecy'}
21st December 2010:
:D i thought you did really well on this. Errm i really like the idea of the story and sometimes i wish it could've happened like this and Harry could still have his family. Well done.
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{reviewid: 2404824, reviewer: 'jrchalut'}
27th August 2010:
I'm enjoying your story so far. I wish your chapters were a little longer. Can't wait to read on!
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{reviewid: 2362643, reviewer: 'hp_gwrocks'}
15th June 2010:
i've reead this story all this evening. i loved it. it is a wonderful story. :)
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{reviewid: 2362531, reviewer: 'bennenbenn5'}
15th June 2010:
Great story with excellent plot and fantastic characters thank you for writing this story
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{reviewid: 2355392, reviewer: 'iloveharrypotter'}
2nd June 2010:
LOOVE THISS STOORRRY!! SO INCREDIBLE! 10/10
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{reviewid: 2355296, reviewer: 'Cassidy%20Chase'}
2nd June 2010:
So it all comes back together nicely. I enjoyed this alternative sequence of events, though sometimes the emotional responses could have been intensified. But overall it was an awesome story.
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{reviewid: 2354527, reviewer: 'annabelle'}
31st May 2010:
I have really enjoyed reading this story. I read it all today. I have been wishing someone would write a story where Harry's parents survived but still had a lot of the same elements as the original. You did a great job.
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{reviewid: 2354438, reviewer: 'GinnyPotter4evr'}
31st May 2010:
PLEASE write a sequel!
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{reviewid: 2354256, reviewer: 'Lana'}
31st May 2010:
Hey, this was an amazing ending to an amazing story! But I really need to read more! Please write a sequel!
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{reviewid: 2347456, reviewer: 'Becca'}
15th May 2010:
I love this story! Please write a sequel, I want to know what happens next!! I check every week for updates!!
Author's Response: Wow. Well I'm honored you check every week for updates. That made my day. The week of the 25th i hope to post a one shot but it won't be a sequel. If i can think of a good sequel over the summer i will definately write it and hope you'll read it and enjoy it. Thanks for reading.
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{reviewid: 2346123, reviewer: 'maya'}
12th May 2010:
very different and nice story
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{reviewid: 2345776, reviewer: 'muggle%20born%20princess'}
11th May 2010:
l like the ending and please please please wright a sequel :-)
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{reviewid: 2345739, reviewer: 'Karkaroff'}
11th May 2010:
Excellent ending to an amazing story and thanks for writing. I hope there is a sequel soon.
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{reviewid: 2345626, reviewer: 'Raven%20of%20Hair%2C%20and%20Not%20of%20Heart'}
10th May 2010:
I liked this story. It had some good ups and downs. Kinda unpredictable. I hope you keep on writing your really good. Good luck with your SAT and colleges, my sister is goin through all that too. Thanks for writing!
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{reviewid: 2344191, reviewer: 'Becca'}
8th May 2010:
Please update soon! I love your story!
Author's Response: Chapter 27 is waiting to be updated. If its accepted it should be up by Monday. I hope you like it.
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{reviewid: 2336393, reviewer: 'Jonna'}
22nd April 2010:
this story rocks, I Love It. One of the best storys i have ever read
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