A few grammar mistakes. And it was weird to think of Hermione as a queen but still I enjoyed it.
:)Author's Response: thankz glad u did like it Report Review
I know it's just the start so I'm hoping the rest will get better. Good but maybe could have been described a bit more.
:)Author's Response: Thankz I will really try to desrcibe more thankz! Report Review
This is really good keep it up!!! plz!!! i love it!Author's Response: Thankz and I am Just Waiting for the next chapter to be Validated! Report Review
Thats so sad, brilliant but sad! there are some grammer mistakes but it was still beautifally writen, update soon pleaseAuthor's Response: Ya I noticed that once I had Uploaded it but I\\\'m trying to enter a new chapter and then I will fix those mistakes no worries :) Report Review
omg i so look forward to readin dis story update soon! i can tell this will be great!Author's Response: I will be very soon its just that Validating takes 4EVER chapter 1 is validating Report Review
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