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Review #1, by i_want_to_be_ginny

26th July 2009:

A few grammar mistakes. And it was weird to think of Hermione as a queen but still I enjoyed it.
Keep writing.

:)

Author's Response: thankz glad u did like it

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Review #2, by i_want_to_be_ginny

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26th July 2009:

I know it's just the start so I'm hoping the rest will get better. Good but maybe could have been described a bit more.

:)

Author's Response: Thankz I will really try to desrcibe more thankz!

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Review #3, by Luna and Hermione Fan18

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17th July 2009:

This is really good keep it up!!! plz!!! i love it!

Author's Response: Thankz and I am Just Waiting for the next chapter to be Validated!

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Review #4, by Ravie_girl29

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10th July 2009:

WA!
Thats so sad, brilliant but sad! there are some grammer mistakes but it was still beautifally writen, update soon please

Author's Response: Ya I noticed that once I had Uploaded it but I\\\'m trying to enter a new chapter and then I will fix those mistakes no worries :)

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Review #5, by Roxi Dawson

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9th July 2009:

omg i so look forward to readin dis story update soon! i can tell this will be great!

Author's Response: I will be very soon its just that Validating takes 4EVER chapter 1 is validating

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