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145 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Theia Luna Ignorance

18th November 2009:
omg..!! this story is great..!! i can't take my eyes off the computer and I'm nearly falling out of my seat everytime it gets exciting which is like.. always..!! when do you think you will have the next chapter..??please update soon..!! =D

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Review #2, by paulina Never Enough

15th November 2009:
You're Head Boy aren' you? she asked.

Author's Response: Haha. Is that a quote that you liked? Thanks for leaving a review either way!

LCF


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Review #3, by Draco's  Ignorance

14th November 2009:
Ok i am loving this! i reckon JK Rowling should reprint the series to include Hermione and Draco's steamy adventures. Seriously the HP series could really do with some more sex scenes. And man, is Draco sexy, a bit evil sure, but so sexy! Where's the rest??? I'm hooked, i need more, haha.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much for the review!

LCF


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Review #4, by Olivia Ignorance

12th November 2009:
Great chapter like always even if it was a filler chapter xD

Anyway I can't wait til next chapter to see more of Draco lol.

=)

Author's Response: Thank you very much Olivia! I appreciate it very much!

xx LCF


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Review #5, by awsomous Ignorance

10th November 2009:
okay yeah it kind of was a filler. but oh well even chapters in harry potter were simply fillers.
9/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)

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Review #6, by awsomous Behind Blue Eyes

10th November 2009:
yeah it was good. draco is pretty hot. but anyway. that chapter was good. i was about to think that maybe you were going to skip to the next scene, where draco and hermione lay in the bed panting. but then she saw the dark mark. at first i thought that maybe pansy had come in and i was like holy shit. that sucks but it wasn't her and the story was really really good.
10/10

Author's Response: Haha. I've had another reviewer thinking that it was Dobby or Kreacher that came in. Sorry if I disappointed guys!

xx LCF


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Review #7, by awsomous From The Inside

10th November 2009:
nice i like your little way to get us to review. very clever. and just for that i give this chapter a
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks a ton awsomous!

xx LCF


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Review #8, by awsomous Everything About You

10th November 2009:
oh my god great cliffy. really good place. well the story was good... actually great. i love it heaps.
9/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much and I love YOU heaps for the sweet review!

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Review #9, by life_writtendown Ignorance

9th November 2009:
thrives? really? Its a shame Draco didn't convince me to write this comment...it would have probably been more.enthusiastic. Excellent filler chapter. Keep on writing!

Author's Response: Yes, really. It's sad I know, but hey I like knowing what you guys think. Yeah... Don't worry. Draco will be back to give you guys some more reasons to review ;)

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Review #10, by kati Ignorance

9th November 2009:
wasnt bad :] left you with a good feeling at the end :]

Author's Response: Thank you very much Kati. Means a lot!

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Review #11, by I_Came4The_Cookies Ignorance

9th November 2009:
grreat stuff cant wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks a ton! Hope you keep liking the story as much as you do.

xx LCF


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Review #12, by awsomous Ex's And Oh's

9th November 2009:
screw the dark lord. what the hell he knows that draco is at school as if he'd be able to just come and visit him.
dick head.
anyway the story was amazing. and even though this has nothing to do with your story i like the new wallpaper. anyway. back to your story. i love it.
9/10

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Review #13, by meadowlarks_cries Ignorance

8th November 2009:
it was rather dull...but it doesnt matter because i know you're gonna make everything spectacular soon ;) Keep writing!!!
10*s

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Review #14, by Not_a_Reviewer Ignorance

8th November 2009:
1. I dont usually review
2. you are a magnificient fanficwriter
3. I have really high standards (;P!) , so be proud that I think you have made a great job to honour Rowlings characters and not just using their names like some
4. I will probably not write another review, but I will still follow this story, and thing about what an amazing fanfic writer you are each time, so know that you have a lot of mental reviews from me;P

Author's Response: 1. I know where you are coming from
2. Wow, that actually made me blush! Thanks so much. I really have no idea what I've done to get such an amazing compliment.
3. Again thank you, and I do indeed feel proud because like you said, i try my best to work with the characters that Rowling has created.
4. That's a shame, but I can do nothing more other than respect your wishes and perhaps hope to see another review from you.

Again, thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. I'm really not used to hearing that and it makes me feel better about what I write about. So, thank you (again, lol).

xx LCF


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Review #15, by Malfoy9285 Ignorance

8th November 2009:
Love love love! I'm so excited to read the next chapter. Although this chapter didn't contain much hermione/Draco interaction, I still really enjoyed it and liked that the characters were "struggling" and confused. Keep writing!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope to keep hearing from you. I THRIVE on feedback!

xx LCF


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Review #16, by spice_rack Ignorance

8th November 2009:
Hey :) I'm really liking this. In fact I liked it so much I thought I'd join up so that way I could leave you a review that wasn't annonymous. I'm a big on correct english and grammar so I thought I'd just point out that there are a few spelling errors and tense errors.. I noticed you used 'me' or 'I' instead of the charcater's names sometimes, but you're probably already aware of that!! What I like most about TDIM is how much the story sticks to Draco's true nature. A Draco/Hermione fic, though my favourite pairing, is mostly unbelievable, because authors often soften Draco into this lovely person who suddenly can't put a foot wrong, which annoys me because JK didn't write him like that. So, I applaud your effort to stay as close to the storyline as possible, as it makes for a good read :D Can't wait to read more.. hurry up and update already, I wanna know what happens!! xxx

Author's Response: Aw, don't I feel mighty influential? I'm flattered that you like my story enough to make an account on HPFF! If you ever write a fic don't hesitate in asking me to read it!

Anyway, I'm prone to get off topic. Wow I'm really honored that you have such high views for my story. I wanted to keep Draco as true to canon as possible. I know about the whole tense errors, and I will get onto fixing those as soon as I can. I'm just trying not to stray from writing this.

Again I want to thank you for giving me awesome feedback! I hope to keep hearing from you in future chapters!

xx LCF


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Review #17, by Malfoy_rulez Ignorance

7th November 2009:
Amazing! great job! i love dramione! great story so far i cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope to keep hearing from you!

xx LCF


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Review #18, by Lilylvr (too lazy to sign in) Ignorance

7th November 2009:
HA HA LOL i luv how you made those little converstaions at the end!!! funny! and this chapter wasnt bad! it was needed for the plot! every word counts!!! this story is amazing!! please update will you!?!?!?!?!?!?! :D :D :D ;D luv ya!

from one of your most faithful readers,
lilylvr who right now is feeling so lazy she didnt even bother to sign in! hurray!
ps. 10:10 ;D

Author's Response: Thanks Lilylvr! It means a lot. Don't worry about the too lazy to sign in. We all have our blah days!

xx LCF


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Review #19, by Midnight Writer Ignorance

7th November 2009:
There were more errors in this chapter in the rest, but it was a filler so it was okay. Not much happened, but it was still good. I would've liked if there would've been more Dramione action, but its all good. Haha. (:

Good job. [:
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Sorry about those. I was up at two thirty in the morning getting it done. I guess exhaustion got in the way. Haha. I'll try not to finish up a chapter so late into the night next time. :)

LCF


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Review #20, by awsomous Only Ashes

7th November 2009:
wow, it's cool because you never actually see voldemort give out task but that was a good way to portray it i thought. excellent job.
8/10

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate the review immensely.

LCF


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Review #21, by awsomous Go All The Way

7th November 2009:
oh now i have to write a review before i can read the rest of it. that sucks oh well good stuff. draco's funny.
8/10

Author's Response: Thanks!

xx LCF


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Review #22, by awsomous Supermassive Black Hole

7th November 2009:
ha very good ron can be a git sometimes that's why i like hermione and draco. but oh well. i actually thought that they would end up together in the books. but guess not. great story.
8/10

Author's Response: Those were my sentiments exactly! Though I kinda figured that Ron and Hermione were getting together. I kind of hoped it would be Harry and Hermione, but oh well. Glad you like the story so far.

xx LCF


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Review #23, by awsomous Anna Molly

7th November 2009:
great. draco gets excited easily. haha oh i keep forgetting but i like the pictures at the top of every chapter. they're really cool.
8/10

Author's Response: Haha, that he does. Then again he is a seventeen-year-old boy who is very sexually charged and is used to getting some quite frequently. As for the chapter images, they're thanks to the amazing Anna_Black!

LCF


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Review #24, by awsomous Let The Flames Begin

7th November 2009:
yeah just as good as the first chapter. only one thing wrong, sometimes you but my instead of him or his. which was confusing at first but then i got it. but yeah good.
8/10

Author's Response: I know exactly where you are coming from! I first wrote this out in 1st person POV and then changed it to 3rd. So I had to go back and change the first few chapters. Either way, I know that that's something I need to fix. But thanks for reminding me!

xx LCF


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Review #25, by awsomous Never Enough

7th November 2009:
haha hermione walking in on draco and that aceline girl giving it a go. that's pretty funny. yeah good story so far. can't wait to read the rest.
8/10

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you keep liking the story!

xx LCF


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