i really like it. it's very detailed and descriptive. keep it up :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy it as it goes on!

xx LCF

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i haven't read previous Demon... but this one already look great! lot of emotions and feelings in your Draco- I love it :) so I'm waiting for more :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :)

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I think the new style of writing is so good. It definatly is a good way to begin the story's clean up. (I guess that's a good way to put it.)

I've been doing the same thing with mine, but when I'll actually post it, I don't know.

Have you finished fixing the whole story?

& congradulations on ur life! You've seem to be getting everything in control! :)

Once again, Excellent story. I love IT! :D

Kim Possible~ :D

Author's Response: A clean up would be the perfect way to describe it actually! Lol.

I'm not done with the whole story as of yet, especially seeing as I've got a lot to work with and not to mention that I'm making sure that things comply to the ToS.

Still, I'm happy you're enjoying yourself with this!

xx LCF

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Nee! I never had the chance to read the original, but WOAH! HOW MUCH CAN ONE KID TAKE? A lesser man would end up in Azkaban for MURDERING everyone in a 3 mile radius! Poor Draco Malfoy. Wait! He doesn't want my pity...

Author's Response: Too true, he doesn't. Haha. I'm happy that you guys are enjoying this as much as you are. I think it's best if you read the original, because looking back at it from where we are now you'd think, "Is this really the same author?!?!" lol.

xx LCF

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it's really nice,your usual amazing writing,but what happened to the old writing?the other story?did you burn it?

Author's Response: Yay, my first review for this new and improve TDIM!

As for the old one, I still have that saved onto my computer and am currently using it to serve as a plot-map for what I'm doing to this one. Hence why I said that everything is virtually the same, I just added some more background story and buffed out the rough edges.

:D

xx LCF

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hey! finalyyy!! i almost had a stroke when you took demon in me off! im so happy your back! (even if u are starting over) ahahah well keep up the amazing work!

ps:check out my story! Sweet Intoxication !!!


Angel_of_music
aka
Karinna

Author's Response: Lol. Hi! It's good to be back. But no, I didn't take the Demon In Me off, it was hidden. For the simple reason that it was too saucy for the ToS ;D

Either way, I'm glad you're enjoying this so far. And yes, I'll check out your story!

xx LCF

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You're back!
Man u scared me, i logged on one day and TDIM was just gone. Glad its back though and im actually kinda happy that ur re-writing it cause then we can experience all the loveliness again!
Ok about the chapter - not as juicy as we are used to but a good start. Its funny, i know whats coming but im still totally looking forward to it. I missed sexy Draco haha.
Also, ur writing is really good in this :)
Anyways, please update like the wind and il be forever grateful
xxx

Author's Response: :D I'm glad that you're enjoying this so far! Don't worry about a thing, Sexy Draco will be back and better than ever!

;D xx LCF

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Woah. I have to say that I've been waiting impatiently for the story to be back up and let me tell you that it was completely worth it!
It certainly seems a bit more dark than i remember or maybe my mind is faltering? Anyway, i still think it's incredible and i can't wait to read more, seeing as you're rewriting it =D
Please update soon!

-Theia..=]

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad that you liked it and deemed it good enough to be worth the wait!

Yes, as of right now the tone is darker than what it was, but don't worry. You'll be seeing more familiar lines/events soon!

xx LCF

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As I noticed this story as updated in the dramiones, I could have SWORN that it had more chapters to it. But then I read the note at the top.
Haha it's great to have this story back. I missed it a lot.
I love your writing, the way you describe everything so perfectly and with full detail. Your vocabulary is beyond amazing.
Poor Draco.
xoxo ~

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much Rainbowsocks! It means a lot! I can only hope that as it progresses, you'll enjoy it even more.

xx LCF

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AHHH you're back! finally! i reviewed your story on the giant fanfiction website and you told me to spread the word, if that rings a bell xD i'm really glad you were able to get this back up here..it pretty much made my day (: love the rewrite and can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: It does ring a bell! Lol. No worries, I remember exactly which reviewer you are! :D

I'm glad that you're enjoying this so far!

xx LCF

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I like the re-write and eagerly await more!

11/10
Laura

Author's Response: Thank you so much Laura! And I look forward to seeing what you think of it!

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Welcome back from the dead my friend! I have recently come back as well. My poor stories kind of died and I'm so discouraged by how badly written they are that my inspiration kind of died along with them. BUT the good news is that I'm writing two new stories that I'm IN LOVE with.
More good news is that I remember your story and I know I loved it. I love your writing, your detail and your realism. It really feels effortless even though, as all writers know, it really isn't. I enjoy this very much and can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you sosososo much for the praise minniedigits! It makes me feel like all this work really does pay off!

xx LCF

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I never got a chance to read the original version so, for me, this is all new. And I love it already! The way you portray Draco is amazing, I can see it so clearly in my mind. And I can feel what he's feeling, I was angry just because he was!
I'm curious as to what Lucius meant. What is it that Draco will never forgive him for? I'm sure I'll find out in time, I have a feeling you won't (or can't) say...yet.
10/10
I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I honestly can't wait for you to see just how exactly this story goes and see how you will react to it.

You're quite right, we'll find out what Draco won't forgive him for in the future... but WAY into it. :)

xx LCF

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