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Review #1, by BitterSweetFlames Sitting, Waiting, Wishing

4th April 2010:
Thump. thump. thump.

The sound of the lump in my throat falling, falling as I read. It's amazing how with very few words you've manged to convey such strong visuals.

I can never look at Hermione the same way now

You're definitely very talented and though you said that was dark, it was okay for me as it was very tastefully and elegantly done.. ^_^

-needs more-

I'm off to read your other stories but you definitely need to write more.. 0.o

ily.

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Review #2, by Elysium Sitting, Waiting, Wishing

1st March 2010:
Wow, Ayesha. That was intense. I loved the way you used short, crisp sentences to punctuate the flow of your writing (i.e. But the pain is real. Itís always real.). That combined with the repetition of the thumping sound makes a really heady rhythm to your story, which is something I always love in a one-shot. It was kind of eerie being inside Hermione's head whilst she was in that frame of mind. She's always been the voice of reason so the fraughtness came through loud and clear. And it was a great hook at the end.

I knew your diction and turn of phrase were really lovely, just based off what you showed me from the story you're working on but I was pretty excited to see what kind of writer you are in general. I love reading aloud and hearing the way a sentence rolls into the next... your story made that a lovely experience. You're a talented girl, all around :P

xox Kylie

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Review #3, by Niika Sitting, Waiting, Wishing

16th January 2010:
ayesha you are god.
amazing.
just.. amazing. seriously D:
ily.

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Review #4, by hermiones_patronus Sitting, Waiting, Wishing

19th August 2009:
i love how realistic hermione descent into insanity was. very powerfully written!
good job!

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Review #5, by stevie_HPuff_girl Sitting, Waiting, Wishing

8th July 2009:
That was intence,, short but it was still powerful. great job!
Best regards
Stevie

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