Love the story so far!
I really like the way you portray your characters. ^^
Well, er, I'll be heading to the second chapter then, XD.

Author's Response: Thanks
i'm sorry i don't have anymore to offer you, but the plot just wouldn't stick for me. I'll probably pick it up again someday... maybe. lolz couldn't resist

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This a great, really! 'Dark' Rose is intriguing, I haven't read another Rose characterisation like this one and it is genuinely refreshing.
To be honest, in concerns to my usual preferences in reading fanfic, I tend to shy away from the angsty, dark type because I get stressed out waiting to see what happens next lol (I know, I know I should stop being an impatient baby) but for this...I think I will definitely make an exception.
The writing style is original and drew me in instantly, it was so thorough and engulfed me in the feel and atmosphere of the story right away. I'd say it really drew me in.
I'm like wow, brilliant.
The references to Twilight are actually alright, I mean, I've read the books and proceeded to dislike them slightly afterwards but the way you've used the ideas and characters makes sense and if anything it offered a different view than what I had of those books.
I really hope you update soon!
spam_up_sam

Author's Response: Thanks. I was just sitting at the computer and this story kind of just hit me in the head. I'm glad that I can offer you a different view of the Twilight books. I wish I could tell you how I write the way I do, but I can't. It's really all about getting in side of your character's head. I'm lucky that this Rose actually lets me; sometimes I think that my characters have mastered Occlumency Xp I'll try my best to get a new chapter up soon ^_^

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It's a special way of writing,
but I like it ! ^^

Author's Response: I try to become my characters as much as I can. Thanks.

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wow this is really good and i like the narrative... im hoping there will be more dialouge later! :) sounds a lot like a twilight novel, but thats not a bad thing. post more!

Author's Response: You just compared me to Mrs. Meyer. Wow. I am. wow. I can't tell you much about what will happen later... I can't even tell you how long this story will be... I can tell you that I'm submitting a chapter right after I finish reviews, so you won't be waiting long! Thanks

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Wow! That was intense! Hope you continuing with this! I love The Twilight Saga! And this story makes complete sense! It's not just another Romeo-Juliet kinda story! I love it! Amasing! Go on! 10/10
Hugs,
~emma

Author's Response: I wasn't going for Romeo and Juliet at all, simply Edward and Bella. I hardly believe that what I've written is amazing, but what matters is what you guys think. It makes me happy.

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i liked it. it was different.

Author's Response: I'll assume that 'different' is a good thing, seeing how you liked it. I hope I can keep you reading.

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O MY GOD!!!(omg doesnt say it all) i am absolutley in luv with this story!!! the summary absolutley capitvated me and i luved the story itself!!! i am a HUGE fan of twilight and harry potter(especially rose and sccorpius) so this is the absolute best story!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN NOT WAIT 2 READ MMOREEE!!!:D

Author's Response: Oh, wow. You have the honor of being my very first review. Ever. I'm honored that you actually like it. Everything just poured out, really. I'll be updating soon, so look out!

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