Wait- is the story over?!
I can't wait for more if it isn't!
It's really well written- I give it a 8/10, because something... well I don't know.
Can not WAIT for more!Author's Response: Thanks so much. Even though this is the end of the Scorpius/Rose portion of the story, I hope to have a spin off written soon. It will have many of the same characters you saw here and it will be a set during the Yule Ball. The ending was never completely to my satisfaction but I had to let go and post it sometime. (So in other words I guess I understand what you are talking about) Thanks again though. Report Review
I forgot to review this story!!! D: Lol, I have nothing to say, this story was really great, you're a fabulous writer :) But, reviewing this other story (that needs some improvment), on Fanfiction(DOT)net, drained all of Kelly's brain juice D: *knocks head and yells at self "Kelly, that's what happens when you procrastinate and don't review stories on time"* Hehe, talking to myself is not a good sign, so I guess I should get to sleep now! (11:46, not necassarily THAT late with my usual bedtime, but I still should get to sleep, feeling tired for some reason.)~KellyAuthor's Response: Hey! Glad you remembered to review. I was seriously beginning to wonder if the ending left a lot to be desired. Thanks for all the support. I have been on vacation for the last week or so and out of town but now I am back and am ready to work on CI and the followup to this. I hope you will check it out. Report Review
Love the Tennant referance!Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Report Review
Yeah! *claps loudly* I'm the first to review :) I really love the interractions between Scorpius and Rose. They seem very realistic, and just like I would imagine them. The part about the potions and Portia confused me a bit. I hope that will be cleared up in the final chapter. (unless my memory is failing me, you confirmed that there would be three chapters) I'm guessing that you'll be writing about the Yule Ball in the next chapter? There are a lot of things that could happen there.to name one, romance ;) I'd love to see Albus have a date (assuming that James is already out of Hogwarts?) And it would be nice to see Hugo dateless (teehee). (I'm pretty sure that the age to enter the Triwizard Tournament is 17, so Rose and Scorpius must me in their seventh year, and Hugo is two years younger, so he should be in his fifth year.which is old enough to go) Really I have nothing else to say unless you want to hear my long list of suggestions of what I want to happen (mainly Rose/Scorpius).but there are pairings I could suggest *wink* Anyway, please update soon! 10/10
~Kelly~Author's Response: Wow, thanks. Sorry about the confusion with Portia, but I promise that that will be cleared up in the final chapter. And yes you are absolutely correct there will be only three. Oh no, I hope I don\'t disappoint with the final installment. It will be a continuation of the day from the previous chapter, but after all your suggestions I am already brainstorming about a continuation story that will be a one-shot or another short story. What I am thinking of will involve several of the minor characters from here: James, Albus, Cora, Hugo and even Portia, and will take place at the Yule Ball. I am already getting excited about it so we\'ll see what happens. Oh and for the purposes of my story here is where I saw everyone: James and Scorpius are seventh years; Albus, Ian, Cora, Portia, and Rose are sixth years; and Hugo is a fourth year (still making him old enough to attend the ball). Thanks again for taking the time to let me know what you think. Report Review
awesome story, can't wait to read the next chapter.Author's Response: Thanks, yolanda. Glad you are enjoying it so far. I plan on posting the next chapter in the next few days so check back. Report Review
Awww!!! I really love it when they're not friends in the first place, it just doesn't seem fit for them to even be something as simple as friends in the first place. This is really cute though :D Rose is trying to be nice and Scorpius is all pissed! (I can't deny it, I'm a sucker for forbidden love) Please update!!!Author's Response: Thanks, I admit I am a sucker for it myself. The idea for this story just really grabbed me and I took off with it. I am glad you are enjoying it. The good news is I have already finished the second chapter with the exception of some minor editing and I plan to put it up in the coming week. I thought I would give myself some time to do rewrites of chapter 3 (also the final chapter, this one is a short but sweet one). Be sure to keep your eye out for it and let me know what you think. Report Review
You are a great writer. I'll be looking for more chapters to come =]Author's Response: Thanks so much! I work really hard. It\\\'s nice to think that sometimes it pays off. The next chapter should be up in the next week. So keep your eye out for it. Report Review
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