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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by victoria talking, yelling, and information

4th August 2009:
PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! great plot!

just wondering, but why do you spell and, 'adn'?

please please please do another chapter. :)

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Review #2, by Stephanie talking, yelling, and information

18th July 2009:
PLEASE CONTINUE! LOVE IT! KEEP IT UP!

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Review #3, by Manwe Valarian talking, yelling, and information

18th July 2009:
Please find a beta, or proof reader. There are many spelling errors that distract from your story line.

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Review #4, by Harry and Ginny talking, yelling, and information

17th July 2009:
again, other great chapter but u have a lot of mistakes. i want to help u with this story so send it to my e-mail which u already have at my last review. will u update soon please?^_^

9/10

Harry and Ginny

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Review #5, by Harry and Ginny after the battle

17th July 2009:
great start 4 the 1st chapter but u have several spelling mistakes. i think u should have a beta-reader (that's a person who checks the mistakes and fixes them) if u want, i can be your beta-reader. send this story to s _ alexandra25 @ hotmail . com (the e-mail doesn't have spaces), and i'll fix every mistake this story has.^_^

9/10

Harry and Ginny

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Review #6, by Sarahh after the battle

15th July 2009:
Nice chapter! looks like this will be a good story! it got a little confusing in the middle, but i still liked it!
update soon!

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