I have to say I didn't like it, sorry but I didn't, there's was nothing about Harry potter in it and I could not understand what Fleur was saying at all

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Very nice, I like this alot, very good adding the french in, the character of Fleur was spot on and so believable!! 10/10

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Very cute. i liked it. For some odd reason, Fluer reminds me of my sister-in-law ( even though she's Mexican not French). Anyway. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

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Very cute...and don't worry, you did just fine with Fleur's accent :D

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Hey, it is subroa from the forums! I am so sorry it took me such a long time to review this story; I have been away for a long weekend. Anyway, here it is:

I enjoyed reading your take on Bill and Fleur's relationship, as well as their reactions to having a baby a little sooner than planned. I have never written this pairing myself, so I can only imagine how difficult it can possibly be to write Fleur. You definitely recieved the hardest detail from me, in my opinion. And I think you worked with what you were given very well. You had a bunch of grammar mistakes -commas where they were not needed and such- and sentences that were missing words. The fic could use another glance over, but it was still a nice read.

I am going to place the winners up in the forums now, so be sure to take a peek at it. :D

~Subroa

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Great job! I love your french accent, and admire the fact you can smoothly write that way. Good one shot, 10/10.

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This is too cute! 10/10

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I love fics like this. They make me happy. The key to Fleur's accent is when she is saying a word beginning with an h, make it silent. Feel free to add double e's and z's. Lovely pen name, by the way =]].

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J'aimes the mix of French and English, it made for a very intressting story

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I love this story. :) I gave it a read because I'm writing a chapter for my story from Fluer's pov and wanted to compare accents. I think you did a very good job at it. I think you characterized her character quite well -- quite upfront and brash. I love how she just started rambling and didn't quite tell him. His reaction was great too. My favorite part was the fluid mixture of eenglish and french in her dialogue. I always imagined that the Bill Weasley household would be mostly bi-lingual (except for Bill).

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cute :-) really sweet

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this fic is so cute. will u do the same to the pregancies on the Weasley family? like Harry and Ginny, Ron and Hermione...^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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AW SO CUTE!!!
LOVE IT!
-ROSIE
P.S. Bill it was a girl!!! hahaha!

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