Hahaha I love this! It's quite refreshing to have such a different Lily! I actually quite like her! :D I love all of the stuff where Remus knows what's going on and the other guys don't heheh I noticed that you haven't updated this story for a while and I reaaallyyy hope you do update it soon because it's so amazing and hilarious!! :D Report Review
Your writing is very great and entertaining!!! Keep up the good work! :) Report Review
Lol. Very amusing. Although I really don't like this Lilly all that much... Curious though, I found this fic by searching Dobby fics. Why would Dobby be in a Marauder fic?Author's Response: Lol idk I didn't list it under dobby or anything. Report Review
Lmfaoo the explosion. :]. Aha, this was a really good chapter! :D.Author's Response: Lol! Thank you =) Report Review
Off to read the next one ^_^Author's Response: Hope you enjoy it =) Report Review
Really loved it! I love how Lily called the officer a twat. She's got guts. :D Lovely!Author's Response: I enjoy her guts as well. lol Report Review
*LAUGHS* OH I loved it! So adorable! and a hickey, I so proud of Lily! anyway another awesome chapter and can't wait for the next one! HURRY FOR UPDATE! I can't wait til Lily and James get together! Is it gonna happen soon??? PLEASE say YES! *claps and loads of cookies* -CharlyAuthor's Response: Lol! I can't say yes or no...but the next one should be up soon. Report Review
LOL! Aweosme cliffie! I don't like it, but I respect it. :D This new character, Nathan, I don't know if I like him. Are we gonna see more of him? Cause if we do, he might grow on me. Awesome!Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad u respect it then =P and I understand how u feel about it. No one likes cliffies! About Nathan, he'll show up again, but if you focus on Lily's thoughts in regards to him in this chapter and her character, you'll know where things are going 4 him.
Glad u liked it and thanks 4 the review! Report Review
*screams* NO THEY CAN'T GO TO JAIL! That was a really really awesome chapter! I love this story! Lily in this one reminds me of Avril Lavigne. Don't know why she just does! I'm the biggest Avril fan around so I think its a good thing! Update really really soon! Is James gonna come and rescue them from jail? That'd be funny! *Claps and lots of cookies*- CharlyAuthor's Response: LMFAO! Thanks!! I like Avril too so thats a compliment to me and Lily =]. And no I don't think it will be James, I've got it written already, so I hope you like it.
The queue is closed tho =[
Wish me luck I'm hoping to get TA status =/ Report Review
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I'm still laughing. Well, not really, seeing as the last part was kinda sad, but I love how demanding Lily is:
“JUST SHOW ME THE DAMN LETTER!”
I snorted right now.
I think my favorite line is this one:
I rolled my eyes and smirked to myself, “Not in a million years, my deer.”
Haha, I just love double meanings.
I hope Leo and Lily make up. It's okay for the delay. It was worth it.Author's Response: lol! thanks I'm glad u liked it!
i wasnt really sure about this chapter, because I didn't know if it followed the right story line.
But don't worry, theyre best friends! Report Review
ooo i smell a rat did James nick some of Lily's potion by anychance?
[=Miss Ginny Potter=]Author's Response: =P i dunno did he?
lool ty 4 the review and the read =] Report Review
Great one! I love Lily and her exam. Very funny. YAY! Jamsehas arrived. Wonderful!Author's Response: loool thanks!
and yea he has entered
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Hey THAT WAS AWESOME! Another really good chapter! CONGRATS! please update soon! Oh and I LOVE Bloom! He's so cute! *Claps and a ton of cookies* -CharlyAuthor's Response: awww thanks lol I'm rele glad u like it!! =] And yea I wanted to throw in a young professor lol.
thanks so much for the R&R
i hope you like the next one too! Report Review
Gold, just gold. I love Lily. This was my favorite line:
I glared at him, “Still, what could possibly attract them to ME? I AM NOT TO BE FAWNED OVER! I AM TO BE DISLIKED BY ALL WOMANKIND!”
Lily evidently doesn't hear herself. Great one!Author's Response: loool I think writing rants is just pure fun cuz all of us say stupid things when we're pissed off
lmao and yea Lily clearly DOES NOT hear herself!!
im glad u liked it!
thx for the review!!!
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ohh, I loved it! can't wait to see the next chapter! I WANT JAMES! Please tell me he comes in soon. I can't wait (I already said that) keep updating soon. *Claps and a cookie* -CharlyAuthor's Response: lool I\\\'m glad u liked it =D
Well James is coming soon ;-P so rest assured! Thanks for the review and the cookie!
I have a few chapters already written so it\\\'s all about the validation time
*fingers crossed i become a TA soon* Report Review
lurve it :) its fabulous
once again i will tell you how much i love how you've characterised Lily
and McGonagalls reaction to her was awsome
[=Miss Ginny Potter=]Author's Response: lol thanks! I\\\'m really glad you like it!
It\\\'s pretty hard keeping her character the way it is without slipping up, so I\\\'m glad it\\\'s working out so far =]
thanks alot for the review, and i hope you like the next chappie. It\\\'s already in for validation! Report Review
I really liked it! I never really thought that lily would be that harsh but you never really know I guess! Congrats and I'm adding it to my favorites! -CharlyAuthor's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I just decided to use her temper and make something else of it. I\\\'m glad u like it!
Thanks for the review!
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wow i like how youv'e portrayed Lily in this, it kicks ass,
I also like how you've got her as the only girl in a group of boys i've never read a story where she didn't hang around with girls. I love it.
[=Miss Ginny Potter=]Author's Response: thanks!
Yeah, I figured maybe she should be part of another kind of fanfic cuz i\\\'ve never seen one with her unassociated with girls or marauders. I figured I\\\'d just see how it goes.
I\\\'m glad u like it
thanks 4 the review!
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Great one! I can really see this story going somewhere. It was really funny, and I just love how Lily's different here. All of her friends are guys, which I've never read about before. At least, I think I haven't. Anyway, great one! And, I think I'm the first one to review this story, ever, which makes me feel pretty cool. You know, to be reviewing a chapter as awesome as this. Why was Lily fuming about the autographs. She's not flattered? I would be, but I still wouldn't give them it.Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad u like it! The reason that I put her with all guys is one: I think that for the most part only dudes would be able to endure such a cynical attitude all the time and two: Lily always has either chick friends or Marauder friends. Her character needs to step outside the box, no?
Regarding the autographs, her character is one that tries to push ppl out. She doesn\'t like ppl paying att. to her.
ANd thanks for being the first to review! I hope that you keep liking the story as it progresses!
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