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Review #1, by TiedAroundLove

22nd October 2009:

Ooooh! Bailey and Remus!
...Am I the only one who caught onto the fact that Bailey is a boy? Because it just seemed that way,
If I'm wrong, then I apologize to Bailey.
And if you based Bailey on anyone. *blushes*
I loved the way you used lots of short paragraphs instead of a few short ones. But deary, some of them are indented, and some out, so it's kind of confusing!
Whhooo!
Twas great!
Cheerio!
Clover

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Review #2, by hpfan45

I : Making a Deal with the Devil

12th September 2009:

ah!!!
can't wait to see where this goes!
it sounds like its going to be a fun fic :)
shannon seems like a good main chracter, though when i got to Beauxbatons i was like, TRANSFER STUDENT?
but it fit really well, and i'll love to hear about her friends, though isn't Beauxbatons a only girl school?
hehehhe love remus. i think ditching each others parties are the cutest thing.
update soonn!!

becca xx

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Review #3, by rainbow~vanny :)

I : Making a Deal with the Devil

12th September 2009:

Amazing! I love the story already. Please continue :) I'm looking forward to the future chapters!

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Review #4, by puellasuave

I : Making a Deal with the Devil

12th September 2009:

haha, i like shannon. and i sense some possible remy attraction underneath...maybe. either way, lovely beginning, can't wait for the next chapter =D

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