This was brilliant. I loved the way you didn't tell who he was until toward the end of the story. And I like how you are very descriptive with them breaking apart. Keep writing!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that keeping him secret worked, as it doesn't always. ^_^ I'll definitely keep writing. :D Report Review
Wow! That was really interesting. I'm not quite sure what to think. I do know that it was really good though. Great job! :)Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for reviewing. :D Report Review
oh i want more of this story)) good start)) i am very very interested)))Author's Response: You\'ll get more! ^_^ I have the second (and last) chapter written, and I will post it soon. I\'m glad this worked out and interested you! :D Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
i luv it, so good, its awsome, so good, write more pleaseAuthor's Response: Thanks! I\\\'ll update soon. XD Report Review
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