Yey! They got married. This is the last chapter, right? Too bad in that case 'cause this story is awesome :D Report Review
I'm glad she told him. I know it maybe seems wierd, but it's good he learns it from her and not Roxy. He really overreacted, I get he's angry but... That's all I can say Report Review
OMG that little bitch Roxy. I hate her so much, but Dom really need to tell Cal now, 'cause this is not good. Report Review
It's a really good story, I havent been able to read it 'cause of school and stuff, but now I'm reading it and it's soo good. But I'm really nervous about what Roxy might do. hope she don't destroy anything! Report Review
this story was so sweet :) I love Dominique Report Review
What a sweet ending. :) After all the drama Cal and Dom went throught its so nice that they get their happy ending. :) Wonderful story! ~LunaAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked the ending. Thanks so much for the review and reading my story! Report Review
Er, honestly I didn't expect this to end this..fast; I had assumed that there'll be more drama waiting, yet I am glad to know that this story finally reaches its happy ending. Congratulation for that and thank you for all the wonderful updates all of these time! :)Author's Response: Okay, thanks for the review. I might come back in the future and redo the end. Report Review
Awww, that was such a sweet ending. I can't believe its over! You are very talented, keep writing. xoxo ~MarciaAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
Wait its over? Seriously? I can't believe it! I didn't even know this was coming. Honestly it felt a little abrupt, a bit like you were done with the fic, but wanted to at least give it an ending. I feel as if there was so much more you could have done with this. It was great to read, I enjoyed it immensely and I hope you continue writing! :)BaletGirAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm thinking about redoing the end in the near future. Report Review
Woo! Awesome chapter!Author's Response: Thanks for the Review! Report Review
Yay! Finally, after the misery, Dom is back with Calvin. Though I honestly wonder, isn't it too easy for him to forgive her? But will Roxy accept thiss...arrangement? I doubt so. Thanks for the update :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
Yay! They are back together. Roxanne will not be happy about this. xoxo ~MarciaAuthor's Response: Yes, they're finally together. Thanks for the Review! Report Review
aww i love Cal, he's so cute even with no hair , (L) himmm, and Dom =) grear chapterrAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! I love Cal too. Report Review
ohhh I dont like roxy, I like dom (even though what she's doing is mean), I like like Cal and Sierra is just too cool. This is such a great story, you have no idea! =)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
Aww poor frank =( story is really good so far (y)Author's Response: Thanks for the Review! Report Review
Best chapter so far, This chapter was very powerful. :) I found it interesting when Ollivander said to Dom about her two selves becoming one and about Dom saying that her favorite color was blue and that her patronus was a wolf. Eva's was a rabbit, like Luna's . :) 10/10 Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thanks! I thought it was an interesting way to end Dom's inner struggle by having Ollivander tell her that she was now one person. Thanks for the review! (: Report Review
Oh snap! Dom's in a fix! xoxo ~MarciaAuthor's Response: She sure is. Let's hope she can get out of it fine. Thanks for the Review! Report Review
i hope dom and cal get back together roxy is not a nice person in thisAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
i hope he forgives her and don.t get to rely on his bad habitAuthor's Response: Okay, Thanks for the review Report Review
Cal is a git. All I got to say. And Dom even had the guts to tell him then, because if she told them later their relationship would just be even more bombed. Great Job, Cal. By the way, Probley is spelled 'Probably'. 10/10 Update soon!Author's Response: Gosh, I can't believe I spelled that wrong...Thanks for pointing that out and Thanks for the review! Report Review
I think it's time foe Dom to tell Cal. Ok, I imaged Nico and I think he's like.. cute. Because I love a good James/Nico and the name reminds me of Percy Jackson and I LOVE those books. Ollivander is smart, I really liked how you put that special touch to him. And I think he still would be alive after 19 years because he's been alive for. how many years? If Dom loved Calvin then she would tell him and if Cal loved Dom then he would not think she's like Roxy. 10/10Author's Response: I must admit that I was thinking of Nico from Percy Jackson when I wrote this chapter. I love the Percy Jackson books too! They're great. Oh, good! I was worried that Ollivander's character wouldn't be right. Thanks for the review! Report Review
OMG! POOR DOM! xoxo ~MarciaAuthor's Response: Poor Dom is right. Thanks for the review! Report Review
poor dom. i hope she gets her intership at ollivander's. i hope Cal will realize he is lucky to have dom. he just needs to listen. such a great story. its really one of the best next gen ffAuthor's Response: Glad you like the story. Thanks for the review! Report Review
looking forward to finding out what happens nextAuthor's Response: Good! Thanks for the review. Report Review
this is one of the best next gen storyAuthor's Response: Wow, I'm glad you think so. Thanks for the review. Report Review
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