You need to edit your Known Death-Eaters list, you're missing Yaxley (unless you consider him an unknown Death-Eater). Report Review
I repeat what the last reviewer said: If it's done, then why not post it? Report Review
If chapter 13 is done why not post it? Btw I loved this chapter! :D Report Review
wow, merlin that was brilliant. Good to see harry a happier personAuthor's Response: Yeah. Those 9 months in an understanding social envirment really did him wonders/
Thanks for the support! Report Review
Nice introduction harry got to hogwarts.
very interesting, why does the boy have self esteem issues, you better spill,
start showing him corridors out of the school like the witch :)
karchy xAuthor's Response: He has the self esteem issues because he 'failed' CHERUB basic training (though through no fault of his own) three times, hence his low confidence in himself.
Okay, I think I'll show him a passage out of the school before christmas. Thanks :) Report Review
Harry is truly a miniature james Bond, poor percy, he won't last longAuthor's Response: Lol. Great, that's what I'm looking for.
Thanks for the review! Next time we see Snape. Report Review
Ohmigod. I think I love this story. It's so awesome! Harry is so cool! I love the unity and harmony of this story! This is a work of pure genius. Well done!Author's Response: Thanks for the support! I really appriciate it. Having readers like you makes writing it worth-wile. Happy reading! - Chimera19 Report Review
haha! THIS IS THE COOLEST PIECE OF LITERATURE I HAVE READ! So bloody awesome! I like the harmony in your writing. Harry sort of balances conflict out. Great use of humour. I love it!Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad that you think that. To tell you the truth, I was getting a little self concious since the last review I recieved a review was 4 chapters ago. Okay, I'm all better now.
The tast of the writing was going to change a little, bit I'll try to keep it harmonized now. Glad to know what's working. Thanks! Report Review
hey its really good
when i first read this story i was like cool spies
then i read the CHERUB books then this again and i was like OMG i recognise this!
its really good and a good base idea to keep Harry away from everyones eyes
pls update soon
the suspense of waiting between chapters is sooo annoying
happy writings :) xxAuthor's Response: Eee. So happy you liked it!
I know what you mean w/ suspense. I'm an avid reader myself.
The next chapter 'should' come sometime in the next 14-ish hours. Report Review
Now this is a good time. It's always good to see a Crafty-Harry-From-the-Streets who, instead of being a dark lord in the making, simply has a...er...unique outlook on life. There are a few of those Harrys out there in fanfictionland but not not nearly enough in my humble opinion. Good work. I look forward to reading more.Author's Response: Thanks for the approval! THis is so much fun to write and I totaly agree with you about the 'Crafty Harry' thing. I really hope I can craft this story up to my readers and my own expectations, though. Report Review
Cute... you have to continue!Author's Response: Thanks! I'll update tomorrow. Report Review
I like it, it's different. I hope it goes somewhere!Author's Response: Thanks! I'll update as soon as the site alows me to. Report Review
Will he get his letter soon? or finish training? pretty goodAuthor's Response: Sorry its taking so long to get to get the story. I have a bunch of chapters ready. Glad you liked it, I think it'll get better, depending on what you like. This story is fun to write, you'll see what I mean.
The answer in your question is in the next chapter, but I will tell you that we won't see CHERUB characters for a while except in flashbacks. We WILL see them, though. He gets his letter soon - next chapter, I think.
THANKS FOR THE REVIEW! Report Review
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