I'm finally here to review=) Sorry it took me so long!
This story is funny and original, and I enjoyed reading it. I love this line:
He might have thought she was cute if her false eyelash wasn’t falling off and hanging in her eye like a many-legged insect.
I could really picture what you were describing:D The story wasn't too fast or too slow, and there was a perfect balance between dialogue and description.
Thanks for entering my challenge! Let me know when you decide what other story you want me to read and review:D
-EmilyAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'll PM you later when I decide. Your challenge was really fun. My favorite part of writing it was doing all the research on hen night games! Report Review
I laughed my head off at this! Hermione and Neville! so hilarious. I love this fanfic great jobAuthor's Response: Thanks for the love! I liked that Neville walked in and then promptly walked out after Hermione kissed him. But that's just me. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
That was amazing - even if I am more of a vodka sunrises girl myself... :-)Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it! I've actually never had a tequila sunrise; I like long islands, personally, but they seemed a little strong for the Hens. Thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
This had me laughing so much! Very funny =) PGAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it! Report Review
that was interestin'
maybe you should write a bachelor fanfic
for harryAuthor's Response: Eek! I'm not entirely sure if I could do a stag night for Harry! Possibly! You have the idea running around in my head now, haha! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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