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Review #1, by magicmuggle01 About a Toilet

9th July 2011:
A great start to this story. I had to laugh at Salazars stubbon streak. And I don't think toilets were available in many places for the time period in question. I see you have not updated this since April last year. Any chance of another chapter please. Pretty please. 10/10. Adding you to favourites so I will know when you update.

Author's Response: Oh wow, I thought no one would read this story again :O

I'm actually going to go through and COMPLETELY redo the first chapter. At the time, I didn't really put the time period into considerations. >.> It's on my to-do list, and then I'll update again. Thank you so much for the review!!

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Review #2, by Aline About a Toilet

2nd April 2010:
That was nice - loved Salazar's way, stubborn like a teenager! o/
I'd like to see more of his relationship with Rowena - will you keep writing it for us, please? *puppy bright eyes*

Author's Response: Of course I will :) I have a few stories I'm updating first, but I'll get one up for this one really soon!
Thanks for reviewing :)

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Review #3, by henryjones About a Toilet

4th September 2009:
very interesting beginning. the founders seem very modern - toilets and detentions and all. i thought people had dungeons back in the day for things like that... anyway nicely written, please do continue it and update soon!

Author's Response: haha, I didn't even think that back then toilets weren't commonly used XD I'll have to go back and edit that! Thanks for the review!

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Review #4, by Harrypotterfan2222 About a Toilet

18th August 2009:
I loved it! Salzar is perfect for Rowena and Godric should be all for Helga!

Author's Response: Thanks dear! :D

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Review #5, by jinxed_writer About a Toilet

6th August 2009:
Great beginning! Can't wait to see what direction this is going to take.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

I'll be updating this really soon, so watch out for it!

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Review #6, by accio_seamusfinnigan About a Toilet

24th July 2009:
I really enjoyed this! I'm looking forward to the next chapters ahead.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll have an update soon! I'm working on it right now!!! :)

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Review #7, by WitnesstoitAll About a Toilet

18th June 2009:
"Houselves were put on this earth one purpose only, Helga,"

I think that it should read: "...for one purpose only, Helga,"

other than that I only would make small changes like: "Salazar's mind to not like ANYTHING Godric did"
and "You are not wanted NOR needed here"

other than these few minor corrections, I think this is a really interesting story. I'm really looking forward to the scene in the story summary. It was a great summary that really caught my attention.

Author's Response: Oh gosh, thanks for telling me that! I always miss stupid mistakes like that even though I read though it like, a zillion times!

Sadly, the scene in the summary is at he end. (The very, very end XD ) But I'm updateing as fast as possible so I hope you get to read it soon!

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