LOVED IT! don't get the it where her bra fell off though???

Author's Response: Um, fell off? It didn't fall off - her white shirt turned see-through, and her red bra was a huge neon sign saying "LOOK HERE, LOOK HERE!" - that's all :D

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That's a pretty damn good lesson on how to write a first person romance one-shot, great stuff :)

Author's Response: Aww, really? Well, thank you xD I'm glad you like it! :)

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Definitely love it!!! This is my first Teddy/Victoire story and I can really see how people would be attracted to this couple. Great writing!! And you did amazing with their characterizations as well. 10/10

Author's Response: Awwie! Thank you so much :) I'm so honored to hear that, since this is my first try at next-gen story - thank you thank you thank you!

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wow! that was really good.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you for the nice review :)

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i love this and its prequel!! and sahara does remind me of someone, yes - luna lovegood. will you be doing another sequel because i hope you are and if you do could you maybe make it a little longer. one chapter just isnt enough

great chapter and story again x

10/10

Author's Response: Aww, thanks :) I\\\'m glad you liked it. Although, I\\\'m not going to make \\\'em longer, they\\\'re supposed to be one-shots all the way - stories you can read alone or in order, sorry :)

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I LOVE IT! You go girl!

Ruby x

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :D

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Love it!! IT gets a 11010101010/10. I always knew that Vic wouldn't care about the date, jest about being with Teddy. I love the part when Vic starts laughing, and can't stop. I felt like laughing. I also liked the part when Vic's shirt when see-trough, and when Teddy had inappropriate thoughts. LOL! Great one! Sahara reminds me of Luna.

Author's Response: Haha, thank you! :D Those were my favourite parts to write, too.. I had to have a story where someone\\\'s shirt goes see-thorugh, and it just felt weird to squeeze it in in any other story - I thought this was perfect! :D And yes, Sahara was meant to be pretty much the copy of Luna :P

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That was extremely funny. I haven't laughed out loud at a story in ages. It was a very nice, light read. I really liked it! Great job! I'm adding it to my favorites.
-love-
LM

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad to hear you liked it :D

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Wow. Teddy's rather ADD isn't he? It was hilarious to read from his perspective, I really loved it! I think I might even like this one better than the last. Regardless, it was great. 10/10

Author's Response: HAHA :D I didn't even notice that ADD thing... but now when I think about it - yeah, he really comes off that way :D Funny.

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OH i love it though Teddys pov !!! i Hope you write more!

Author's Response: There will be two or three one-shots with this pairing.. I find it somehow easy to write, and I have quite a writer's block with some of my stories at the moment :D

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This is a really good story! At the end of it, I was shouting "Yes!" and doing a power-punch of my own. I was also listening to Eminem's new song "Beatiful," so that probably helped set the mood.

Anyways good story, besides grammar and such, beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :) I'm sorry for the grammar, though.. :/

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I loved this! I love Victoire/Teddy fics so I couldn't resist! This was awesome! It was cool to read from Ted's POV and you captured him perfectly! Guys definitely get nervous. I have an older brother and when he started dating, he was nervous about what he'd wear etc to impress his girlfriend! I loved the whole rain scene at the end. It was a nice touch. Great job. I read your Love Story fic but I'm not sure if I left a review for it.hmm I'll check that.
10/10 - great descriptions and characterizations. :)

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you - you did the banner to the story, right? Again, amazing job! Love it, thank you :)

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i really like how you write teddy and victoire.
it all matches - her personality, his one, and them together-
right now, i'm silently hoping for more ^.^

anyway, wonderful story !

Author's Response: There will be more, two or three more, I guess... ^_^

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