This is a good start. I think that it was a little too short, but really good. It's pretty mysterious, and that's leaving me waiting for more. Excuse the CC. Anyway, great!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, I was kind of hoping for a mysterious edge, and I think I pulled it off quite well. The next chapter (which may not be up for quite a while, since I'm focusing on another series at the moment) is basically completely different, but I thought that this chapter would make a better prologue, but for now on, this story is going to be from Lily's point of view. Closing_In Report Review
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