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9 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Jasnie Revision

29th November 2011:
It's the second time I read this story and I like it... I am probably going to red it again soon.

Author's Response: glad you like it enough to read it more than once. :-)

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Review #2, by 123 Revision

23rd January 2011:
hahaha cute! i like your story!

Author's Response: thanks very much

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Review #3, by harry4eva Revision

15th February 2010:
I think your story was really good! Could you write a sequel to it or something like that? I would definetly read that!

Author's Response: yeah sure i can certainly give it a go.

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Review #4, by writergirl8 Revision

21st July 2009:
aw so cute loooved that!~writergirl8

Author's Response: thank you glad you liked it.

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Review #5, by vikki222 Revision

10th July 2009:
aw.this story is so cute!

Author's Response: thank you very much, please read my other stories too.

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Review #6, by hp Revision

16th June 2009:
aw cute! this is just adorable!

Author's Response: thank you kindly, mwah!

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Review #7, by Marybeth Revision

11th June 2009:
Cute little story - nicely written. I would have enjoyed more of what they were thinking and feeling, but it was enjoyable.

Author's Response: glad you liked it, will try and do that in another story possibly.

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Review #8, by Harry and Ginny Revision

10th June 2009:
great story u have here. my guess is this is on their sixth year in the middle of the school year. u could write Harry and Ginny talking at night after their first kiss. this is just an idea but i would like to know what do u think?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I can do a Harry and Ginny story will see if I can get something done by next week. glad you like this one though.

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Review #9, by The Arethusa Got Lucky Revision

10th June 2009:
There exists punctuation besides that which ends sentences. Things such as commas and semicolons. You need to learn how to use them. In your entire story, there are 9 commas and 0 semicolons. That's not nearly enough.

Author's Response: Appoligies for that, I forgot to proof read it before i put it up. I will get on that though.

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