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Review #1, by redherring Meeting Quota

31st July 2009:
Another great chapter! I really, really love Hugo. He's just brilliant. I also kind of love James:

"You'd do what, snog me senseless? I know I'm handsome, but please, your dad would freak." - Ha! That made me laugh.

I've just got one small correction:Henrietta at the front desk was smiling when I came back to the central office after turning in my mark. - this is in first person, but the rest is in third...

Anyway, I loved it! Hope you update soon :)

Author's Response: Ahh! Thanks for the spot! It's in the process of being corrected.

When I decided to cameo James, that whole exchange between them just sort of came in my head all at once, I was so excited.

I haven't done any work on the next chapter, but the whole Malfoy thing was a set up for it, hopefully its enough inspiration for me.

Thanks for reviewing again!


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Review #2, by Death Horses Hugo Weasley--Hit Wizard

25th July 2009:
I really like this :) it's FedoraDuo by the way.. thought I would check out the story my banner is associated with :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you approve! The 2nd chapter is in for validation, but of course that's going to take forever, haha! Thanks for checking it out!

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Review #3, by redherring Hugo Weasley--Hit Wizard

4th July 2009:
Wow, brilliant first chapter! Seriously, I loved it! And I loved that you used Hugo, as well, as Hugo-centric stories are pretty rare - usually he is only ever there as Rose's little brother. I really liked your characterisation of him, as well. Oh, and the Thirsty Gnome was pure genius! It made me smile :)

Anyway, thanks so much for entering the challenge, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I like how Hugo is in this story, too. Very independent of his family. And there are more pub names in the next chapter which is currently up for validation!

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